rate_review Reviews

Nice. Why did you stop?

Awsome story, please update soon. I'm looking foward to what happens next.

Aside from feeling a wee bit rushed that's pretty good.

not bad..

Wow, pretty good

Dude, this is insane. lol, I laughed so hard on the second one when everyone got disgusted with Cy and I couldn't figure out why. And then Starfire said that thing about killing for someone you love, I started crying it was so funny. Just bloody amazingly funny! Other than that, the story flows too fast. Its like a river, things, scenes, emotions, and problems go by like a raging river. You get the jist of them, but by the time you realize something has happened, you are in a different scene. You gotta slow down in the story, its like your giving me a summary of a story instead of the actual story. Its a great summary, but I want to read it all. Keep on writing!

haha yur writh raven really is OC, great story, hurry and write a new chapter

Very promising, I see a definate plot being set up. I am curious how Raven will do in a future battle with her emotions being under her control now.

Haha i read it first cause I'M THE BETA. (laughs evily!)

excelent start i am looking forward to seeing much more