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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eight words. for the love of god, please write more!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Brilliant. Write another write another write another. Ha Ha Ha.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. That was a seriously great story. It's good to finally sit down and read a story without a ton of smut in it(but the smut's okay to! lol)It was an incredible story with an even better plot. Kudos to you.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequel Sequel Please!!!!!!!!!!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, here is my train of thought in the order I thought it. Interesting slightly AU story. Not too different from the cartoon, and if I remember War World right, Green Lantern and Hawkgirl didn't play a huge part. Great grammar and spelling. Very Interesting plot and storyline development. Near the middle of chapter four, I started to think you were going a little too far off the original storyline but still good. Then the ending. Brilliant. That was the best ending to a fanfic I have read in a while, and I really can't say anything more than that. I will be reading any other fics by you as soon as I get the time. Thanks.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm sorry to say . . . but this was great. Hahaha. It had everything but a nice walk off into the sunset, but that's hardly a criticism. Excellent work.
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story, nice and long. The ending got me going though. Was she going to say that she was pregnant or what, i mean, this was a mighty bogus ending. Still liked the story though.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best alternate adultfics I've read in while. Thank you so much for the surprise ending.