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eight words. for the love of god, please write more!

Bloody Brilliant. Write another write another write another. Ha Ha Ha.

Okay. That was a seriously great story. It's good to finally sit down and read a story without a ton of smut in it(but the smut's okay to! lol)It was an incredible story with an even better plot. Kudos to you.

Sequel Sequel Please!!!!!!!!!!

Alright, here is my train of thought in the order I thought it. Interesting slightly AU story. Not too different from the cartoon, and if I remember War World right, Green Lantern and Hawkgirl didn't play a huge part. Great grammar and spelling. Very Interesting plot and storyline development. Near the middle of chapter four, I started to think you were going a little too far off the original storyline but still good. Then the ending. Brilliant. That was the best ending to a fanfic I have read in a while, and I really can't say anything more than that. I will be reading any other fics by you as soon as I get the time. Thanks.

Well, I'm sorry to say . . . but this was great. Hahaha. It had everything but a nice walk off into the sunset, but that's hardly a criticism. Excellent work.

I loved your story, nice and long. The ending got me going though. Was she going to say that she was pregnant or what, i mean, this was a mighty bogus ending. Still liked the story though.

That was one of the best alternate adultfics I've read in while. Thank you so much for the surprise ending.