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for The Land of Make Believe

by nancyb

person Nobody
schedule September 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really good story. Wish you'd make a sequel to this.

person Storyseeker
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"It's an easier pretense than most and it chases her into her dreams."

What poignient imagery! This whole story builds and rocks like a wave. Your timing, your wording, everything: Wonderfully done! Thank you for making my night!
person Kate
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so bloody brilliant!! You just have to do more, I love your writting style and choice of words!
person Lily
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such a sad story... and beautifully written
person Angel
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person Loretta
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is truly beautiful.
person harleyquinn
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this kinda made me sad...i mean barbara loves batman...but he loves catwoman...good, GOOD story!
person batman batgirl fan
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story... really emotional...also would like to see more of the BM/BG stuff

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