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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice couple of chapters there. I like how you're writing Terry, even if things are going to blow up in his face later (nice OC in Lora to). Looking forward to more.
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I like the story, yes, please continue.
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cool so far. I was also reading this on FFN.net and was so sad it had disappeared, so I'm glad I found you again. Anyway, enough of the scary, stalkery thing, I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Please update soon!
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!
love the story! i had seen it on fanfiction.net and when it wasn't there anymore i kinda missed it. hope you update soon. i can't remember what chapter i was on in ff.net but i'm interested to see what will happen for terry and lora. 5 stars!*****
love the story! i had seen it on fanfiction.net and when it wasn't there anymore i kinda missed it. hope you update soon. i can't remember what chapter i was on in ff.net but i'm interested to see what will happen for terry and lora. 5 stars!*****
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!! This was so good. I have yet to find an author who can honestly and completely capture Terry McGinnis attitude in it's fullest sarcastic greatness. I mean seriously, I could so see the entire thing in animation as if it was actually made and hear the voice actors as if they were reading a little script for it.
Please keep up the good work!!! Don't stop!
Please keep up the good work!!! Don't stop!