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I'll admit this; I didn't read it because there were quite a few spelling errors. I'm usually good at understand what people are trying to say despite typos; this is not one of those times.

Please learn the value of paragraphs.

I might read this if I can understand it more.

Also, if you REALLY want people to read this, you must include sexual content. I mean, it's adultfanfiction.net for a reason, right?

Why is this on this site and not ff.net? It's complete lack of sexual content is staggering.
I have copied it and MSTied it. The redundancies in this are just too good to pass up.
If you don't like it, too bad.