rate_review Reviews

i loved the first chapter was really sweet. the second chapter was hot.

I love this story; I come back to read it every now and then.

Might be a little late to the party here, but just read it...and wow. Amazing writing. Really. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Awesome story!
You should write another! :)

aww great story! i just wished it was longer! maybe a sequel? such as the reaction at the reunion of them going together?? hmm hmm? anyway great story! i loooove betty and jug fics!!

aww i loooove this story even though it was super short. please write more!!!

I enjoyed this because I am a longtime Archie fan, and I never thought of Betty and Jughead together, except in a random kind of way, in friendship fics.

But this was good. I would have liked the love scene to include a little bit more of what each of them loved about the other, and a teeny bit of pillow talk afterward, but other than that, it was great. Got any more stories?

this was resally really really really really really really realy really really reall yreally really really really REALLY! good! i do wish that the sex part was just a little more romantic though.

ok, i really really unbelievably liked the beginning of your story. its jsut that i think that hte end should have been more romantic, and not so 'hot' the beginning was so good, i cant evn say in words, and i was thrilled to read it, but then you kind of trailed of al ittle, and i thinkt hat you should have made it much more, as i said romatic...teender, and love...filled? thats just the way it seemed to me that you had started out, but then you went the sex route instead of hte love-making route (yes, theres a difference!!) i would absolutley love you if you fixed the end to make it more romantic, because i really really realy really really really really liked the beginning soo sooooo sooooooo soooooooooo soooooooooo much!!!!!!

That was really sweet. Loved Jughead and Betty but never imagined them together. Thanks for the story. :)