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  • From ANON - Crawling Elf on December 19, 2003
    Great story, really dark I love it, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Ericedwyn/Ericedwy Ü on January 05, 1920
    The last chapter was exceptionally done. Batman's idea of therapy was very effective! :)

    I cried at the sweatness of the gift Batman gave. And you've captured his character very well as well as the actions he chose. This is one of the best scenes I have ever read. You are truly gifted. Please continue! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - moviemaniac on December 03, 2003
    Dude that was so...intense...it was awesome. CONTINUE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Birman again on December 01, 2003
    Oops, forgot to add this. I think it's really great Batman has been... planning ("The Batman ALWAYS has a plan" *snicker*) how best to, uh, approach Diana about her problem. It's very much in character, and really nice of him. Then again, he's also in love, so why wouldn't he? ^^

    Umm... I just got one small problem: I couldn't help but LOL when Batman said "baby". It's quite OOC for him, but I wonder if perhaps he was trying to get into the character of the rapist? IMHO, "Princess" is almost like a petname for Diana for him. Hearing Batsy say "baby"likelike hearing Diana say "dude". XD

    That aside, I think the new plot development is fantastic. And he wants her to move in!!! Okay, I can understand the rationale behind it (besides J'onn would be getting all those "nice dreams" from Diana from now on), but still!!

    Oh yeah, I would like to see how the rest of the JLA reacts to the news of Diana's rape. So far, I've seen Clark's and J'onn's. I remember this fic where GL catches them at it in the kitchen, and boy were his, Plastic Man and Flash's reactions hilarious. And Nightwing was mooing away at the thought of "bumping uglies with Wonder woman!" Ah, Nightwing... The hapless protege with GQ model looks.

    Can't wait until your next update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Artemis on December 01, 2003
    holy fuck. . . I'm just speechless. . .

    um, more please?
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  • From ANON - Birman on December 01, 2003
    What can I say, except this was an AWESOME chapter... And that initial part where Batman was doing the kneeling thing and that thing to Wondy's thigh reminded me of that scene iketiketeia, ya know, when he made the plea. Man, this (and that) is so frickin' hot.

    And woohoo! Plot!
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  • From ANON - Moviemaniac41 on November 28, 2003
    Wow its co alo along great so far. Really good story and hope u update soon.
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  • From SteelMagnolia on November 21, 2003
    Yea!!! We get more! :)
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  • From ANON - Birman on November 19, 2003
    Amazing story. Very true to character, and despite oft oft-used subject matter in a WW fic, very different from the norm. It's realistic despite the fact that we're talking about metahumans here. I like the inclusion of Superman as her best friend. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - bunny on November 15, 2003
    hey,
    this coming along real nice. this chapter was really well done, and i enjoyed it, I like how you are keeping character with Diana, and not just making her act like everything is ok, but you are protraying as an actual victom of rape would more or less act. alot of people who do rape based stories dont do that. I like how you are developing the tension between her and batman, and i would have thought that you would have gone so far as to make Bruce leave the JLA so that Diana would feel better and not so afraid and have him do it also becuase he cares. I cant wait for the next instalment, and by all means let me know if you need any idea's or help with concept. Keep up the good work.
    ~~~~~Bunny
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  • From ANON - Mija on November 04, 2003
    omg that was soo intense and damn good writing..I dont visit this part of the site, actually my first time and the first story Ive read, you have wonderfull writing ability and great detail, the emotions and everything..It is a sad and dark fic but I must say that I truelly do love it and if it wouldnt be to much trouble could you email with the next update? my email is ^^^ there..lol..anyhow if not I will check back in time to see if anymore have been posted, again great writing..:-) Mija
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  • From brainfear on October 24, 2003
    Oh man. I hope you continue with this soon. It's so good.
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  • From ANON - lordanhur on October 18, 2003
    great love it
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  • From ANON - Moviemaniac on October 02, 2003
    Really good story!!!! You have to continue!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2003
    Wow usually i hate stories that have to do w/ rape, but this is really good. I hope u continue.
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