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Reviews for The Equilibrium Deviance

By : Ksennin
  • From Daye on August 08, 2014
    I read the first few chapters but once we hit the teen titans section my interest waned.

    If you're wanting opinions, I'd love to see more 'Marry The Knight'
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  • From ANON - gnome_man on July 30, 2014
    Chapter 8: Interludes. Now, this is mystery. Two supervillains discussing their targets, then another pair, discussing their finances. Very mysterious, very ominous. Vey interesting and well-written, too. What do you expect from Zev95 and Ksennin?

    This is what I expect, and what I want.

    Very good work, guys.
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  • From AnansiScribe on July 27, 2014
    Well, that escalated quickly. Nice twist, having "Kory" turn out to be Cheetah in disguise. Fun while it lasted, though. Curious as to what this goddess's endgame is. Also, somewhat reassured by the idea of even superheroes having body image issues, most likely the ones whose powers don't rely on a lot of physicality, at least not in their natural forms. A bit more realistic, for whatever that's worth.
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  • From ninesenshi on July 21, 2014
    Well written. Chap 2 was very creative with the uses of Vixen's powers for sex. Would like more scenes like that.
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  • From ANON - gnome_man on July 18, 2014
    As always, very well done. You could see Power Girl quivering from need, with quite a wet mess left over in her chair afterwards. And Donna/Kori/Garfield is a great combo. That scene was just dripping with juices. Sooo hot.
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  • From MrRigger on April 27, 2014
    Honestly, it's not a bad story, but if you're going to write anything, I think I'd rather see you continue on some of your other projects. I'd love another chapter of Do It For Charity, and I want to see what happens with Valerie and Sue in Corruption Is Just Another Change Of Perspective. If you end up putting out more of this story, I won't be disappointed, I don't think I've been disappointed by any of your work, but this isn't my favorite.
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  • From ANON - Dec on April 26, 2014
    Really liking this. The characters (Peeg and Vixen) actually sound kinda like they're supposed to. Plus I always love Harl and Ivy interacting, one of my favoutite couples. They're a great pair.
    Any clue the ratio of F/F and M/F scenes will be in future? Fifty/Fifty? I mean, I kinda prefer the former, girl-on-girl stuff, but your writings very good, so I may actually enjoy the latter!
    Nice twist with 'Batwoman', geninly didn't see that coming, but when it did it made total sense!

    Looking forward to more, if you can manage it!
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on April 26, 2014
    What happened to the real Batwoman?
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  • From ANON - Ace on April 25, 2014
    AMAZING amazing read. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep this going. I loved it :D
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