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Reviews for Jerk of Hearts, Queen of Spades

By : xyggimartak
  • From ANON - ohshitispoketoosoon on September 23, 2014
    i just read an older fic
    and uh, maybe thats the
    best one i read here----
    yours is up there though.
    yes, i would change some
    things---------i dont
    think reggied get used to
    midges genitals so fast.
    i can see reggie
    having butt sex with a
    pretty boy he used to
    think was a girl. i CANT
    see him grabbing midges dick
    so soon after he found out----
    its not reggie.----the mother
    was a thin villain-----midges
    animal sex noises should
    have been leftout-----BUT
    the rest of it is great-------------------------------------
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  • From ANON - kandler on September 20, 2014
    best fic here and theres hardly any reviews, go figure
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  • From ANON - Pogo on August 19, 2010
    Also I hope that didn't seem negative with that last comment I made, I personally just can't wait to see what else you're gonna write. Since I still appreciate you touching on a subject not often taken seriously, and hope to possibly see you touch upon it again.
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  • From ANON - Pogo on August 19, 2010
    Let's just hope you're cooking something else up in that old noodle of yours.
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  • From Atomica_Syndrome on July 17, 2010
    This is incredibly well-written! The one thing I find myself loving AFF more than FF.net is because so many writers here delve into the characters and flesh them out into something believable and full of depth. The Archie comics aren't ever deep, but you really pulled the characters into great serious roles! You managed to have the main characters very in character despite the plot twist, which makes a great and riveting read that really left me in suspense. Thanks for showing this on this site, I really had a great weekend reading and discussing it with friends.
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  • From ANON - Peter on July 17, 2010
    Original Ceenote, the story isn't about "hermaphrodism", it's about transgenderism.
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  • From CeeCee on July 16, 2010
    You've covered so many of the bases with this story. Midge's hermaphrodism is on point, you can see how it affects everything she does and makes her have to deal with things like problems within her family, showers in the girls room, etc. You've also managed to make Reggie, notoriously a jerk, into a sensitive person who's still confused and admits he doesn't have all the answers. I love the cast of minor characters, particularly Dilton, Ethel and Frankie, all of whom seldomly get used.

    I'm glad you updated this story. It's wonderful.

    I know this is essentially a hetero fic, but I'm part of a Livejournal community called riverdaleslash. I'm going to post a link to this story there, if you don't mind, because it's definitely worth sharing. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Cosio on July 16, 2010
    Wouldn't mind a bit more descriptions, but this is more of a dialogue driven piece. Decent.
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  • From TimedWatcher on July 16, 2010
    Really have been enjoying the five chapters I've read.

    Only portion I cringed at was the Aerosmith reference.

    Other than that, good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Taggert on July 16, 2010
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From CeeCee on July 11, 2010
    Archie transgender hermaphro-fic. Never woulda thunk it.

    This was excellent. More, please.
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