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Reviews for Cruel Liaisons

By : HoneyBeez
  • From ANON - paRamanK on September 20, 2014
    its different! lol
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  • From hannible on June 14, 2012
    I really can't comment on the story as I am unable to finish reading the whole story.It ends with the twins going to the Coopers door..What happens after that???
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  • From CeeCee on May 07, 2012
    Poor Adam. Guy seems pretty desperate.

    I'm kinda looking forward to the showdown between Cheryl and Veronica. I wish I could beta for you, but I'm strapped for time myself. But I'm glad you updated. I like these characters, there isn't that much fic with the Blossoms in it.
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  • From BrenTenkage on April 12, 2010
    This ought to be good, you kept each character within what they normally are. I can't wait for more
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  • From CeeCee on April 11, 2010
    I'm enjoying the drama! Jason's therapist was a riot; I can't blame her for being annoyed with him. "I need a vacation." That was funny.

    Your English is actually very good, you have a good grip on vocabulary and you did a great job of the tone and emotion of each character. There were a few verbs that needed fixing the way they were conjugated, but that didn't make any real problems with reading it, this is still an excellent story so far.

    Good job, Honeybeez.
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