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Reviews for The Long Walk

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - Lizzy on July 09, 2010
    I think your story is wonderful, and insightful. And that you captured each characters personalities, and even accents perfectly. I'm sorry you don't get more reviews or hits on your story. They are really missing out.
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  • From ANON - DarkJedi188 on June 27, 2009
    I'm surprised that Michelangelo left his GBA at April's apartment. I thought that he'd be very protective and possessive of such a device.
    Casey Jones is making me laugh, as usual. I keep wondering why he never joined the circus.

    And it seems very obvious to me that Master Splinter has approved of Breech and will allow her to stay with the turles in the sewer...
    Well, time will tell for sure. So keep updating!
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  • From ANON - capt_davy_jones_gal on May 21, 2009
    OOH i like this story...Don has always been my fav....casey's accent is good but half the time i have to read it twice to understnd it....good portray of his accent tho...please keep going

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  • From ANON - DarkJedi188 on May 09, 2009
    Based on Donatello's caring attitude towards both Master Splinter and Breech, I'm tempted to assume that he would easily be able to cope with fatherhood in the near future.

    P.S.: Oh, and about Casey's accent, since I'm not from New York or Boston, I can't really qualify as a judge on whether it sounds good or whether it sounds awful. It's just in there and I'm not really bothered by it. I think it only adds to the amusement. 'Nuff said.
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  • From ANON - DarkJedi188 on May 02, 2009
    I hope that this story eventually ends with Casey and April having a wedding ceremony. And I've always wondered what a half-feline & half-turtle baby would look like... But is it even possible for a reptile and a mammal to copulate in the first place?
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  • From leanntwilight on April 29, 2009
    I have to say I've always loved the turtles growing up. I haven't gone through all the chapters just yet but I adore it so far. Go Ninja, Go Ninja, GO! There. I've said my peace and salute you. lol
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  • From ANON - LunarIris on April 05, 2009
    I think your doing a wonderful job so far on this story
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  • From FanFicFantast on April 04, 2009
    This is realy nicely written. Just two chapters in and you have my deepest interest. IN fact, iīll go check what else you have written right after this. Oh, just so you know, i donīt usualy review just to review so donīt expect something for every chapter, but i will be reading and enjoying all the same. :)
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