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By : CeeCee
  • From tempest on May 01, 2011
    You finished, Cee! Better late than never. I wen back and re-read the whole story so that I could savor it from beginning to end. I love this story. It has to be one of my favorite Archie stories to date. All of your Archie stories are on my favs list. You do such a wonderful job of really bring the characters to life and making them feel like real people I could've gone to school with. And at the same time, you bring an "adult perspective" into it by having the adults comment on how their younger years were or having them say that they won't care about any of this in 10 years. It's exactly true. The ending is sweet and simple. It doesn't promise forever, but it doesn't say that forever might not happen either. Congrats on finishing! :-)
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  • From tempest on January 12, 2010
    An update! You don't know how glad I am to see one for this story. I just want Ethel to show Midge up one good time, I swear, just to shut her up. I want to see Cheryl get her just desserts, too--the burnt bitch. And too bad Alex couldn't have been punched in the mouth one good time.

    But you made up for all that with the sexy interaction between Moose and Ethel. Hopefully her parents won't be too hard on her. Can't wait to read what you have in store for the prom. I'll know it'll be spectacular.

    You always compliment me on my little sayings that I throw in my stories, but you do it, too, girl. I was chuckling at the things Nancy said, and lines like this: "Just when her day was finally picking up, along came the fly in the ointment."

    As usual, you have me totally gripped with your writing. It's so engaging. You really do have a knack with emotion and setting a scene. :)
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  • From maxiefae on January 02, 2010
    you are a goddess!!!!
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  • From EvaBrick on December 27, 2009
    Thanks for updating, Cee! The story is very realistic, but I have to say that the last chapter (Catty) kind of creeped me out because it reminded me EXACTLY of high school. Actually, *cringes* I'll tell you a story...

    Picture me at 17 with the bf in the back of my dad's huge old car (notice the loser bf didn't pick me up) out in the middle of nowhere. He was in his Scooby-Doo boxers and my shirt and bra were long gone. We were fooling around (although I never went all the way in high school) and all of a sudden, I got this nervous chill (and not 'cause I had no shirt on). I reached for my jacket, pulled it on, and zipped it up. Seconds later, the car flooded with light... the cops had found us.

    Well, the bf pulled on his shorts and shirt pretty damn fast, but neither of us had any shoes on and we were in the back seat so it was pretty obvious what we were doing. *cringes again* Then the biggest cop I ever saw was standing outside the window, shining the light in our eyes to see if we were smoking pot or whatever. He asked whose car it was and I had to show him my licence and the registration. He asked me if my dad knew where I was and I don't even remember what I said.

    But the thing that shames me the most, a good decade later, is that before he left, the cop looked at me and his eyes softened and he said, "Well, I guess I just have one more question for you; are you sure you want to be here?" I must have looked like such a child to him and I'm sure he could see my bra on the floor at my feet.

    I said, "oh yes," in my cheerful little way, and he looked at me for another moment, shook his head, got into his car, and left. I felt like such a whore.

    And you know what the real kicker is? We really were just kids and neither of us knew what we were doing. I wasn't aroused and I didn't find him attractive. I was just curious about seeing and touching a male body for the first time. I didn't even like him that much. Maybe there'd be less teen sex if kids could see what the opposite sex's equipment looks like and learn how it works... maybe sites like this have an educational role... 'cause come on, it wouldn't be hard to lie about your age to get in here and read stuff.

    But I digress...

    I wonder if Ethel and Moose are really falling in love or if they're just being teenagers.

    Looking forward to the next update! :)
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  • From maxiefae on November 21, 2009
    PLEASE PLEASEP[LEASE UPDATE OK I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!
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  • From maxiefae on November 19, 2009
    I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
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  • From tempest on October 15, 2009
    Okay, you've gotta update this (like I'm in the position to make demands as slow as I update). I'm loving your Archie fics, and you will have more reviews in coming days for your other Archie fics. This is the FIRST good Ethel fic I've read, and I mean that. I've read plenty of fics for other characters, but not Ethel. Moose & Ethel, who'da thunk you. You, apparently. This story is like watching a caterpillar morph into butterfly, and I like you made it into a realistic, gradual change instead of making her a maneater from the word "go!" Very nicely done--AS ALWAYS!
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  • From Atomica_Syndrome on August 07, 2009
    I'm really glad I came across this story! You put two of the most well-known characters (but often shoved into the background) and gave them alot of depth. You made them so much more human and it all played out so well. The gradual development of their attraction is very very addictive and very mutual. It's great to encounter stories like this here, keep at it!
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  • From Boazig on July 24, 2009
    AWESOME chapter! Awesome fight seen.

    I check to see if youve updated like every day, I was so excited XD thank you!
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  • From EvaBrick on July 21, 2009
    Ahhhh! Thank you for updating! I've been hoping you would! :)

    Awesome plot twist; I knew that something would have to give eventually. You showed a lot of self-restraint with Moose's reaction to Alex's assault. I hope Alex gets hit by a bus and somehow gets his nuts torn off... jail is too good for him. I was scared that you'd have Moose kick the shit out of him and get arrested and not be able to go to college.

    Thanks again for updating - I can't wait for more! :)
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  • From maxiefae on June 09, 2009
    what are you doing to me! do you hate me or something? please update i need some big m and big e love here
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  • From EvaBrick on May 11, 2009
    I can't wait to read some more of this story. I'd never thought of Ethel and Moose hooking up, but they're actually pretty perfect for each other when you think about it.
    It's too bad that Midge isn't a dude so someone could punch her. I've always thought she was such a bitch, even when I was a kid.
    I'm a little disapointed in Moose, though. He's so immature; Ethel's too good for him and he needs to realise that and get his act together before she realises it herself.
    I really hope that you update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
    AWESOME STORY!
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  • From maxiefae on April 30, 2009
    I.LOVE.THIS.STORY PLEASE PLEASE UPDATED
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  • From Boazig on April 10, 2009
    I love this story. Ive been checking to see if it was updated like every other day. It made my WEEK to get another chapter! I love it :D
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  • From maxiefae on April 09, 2009
    that rocks i hope bee and big will have a happy ending
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