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Reviews for The Birthday Present

By : Kip
  • From ANON - fiona on October 13, 2012
    I had a great time in this story world. Perfect Batman themes and atmosphere and I loved the personality battle between Bruce and The Bat. The hint of Batman, Sandy and Moon together was a bit of a tease no?
    Well done on a massive amount of work.
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  • From ANON - nk on April 03, 2010
    Hey I just wanted to say I really enjoyed the story! It was very well written, and for the most part you have a great grasp on writing for the superheroes, and did a great job with your own character. And the sex was awesome too! ;D As for any criticism, I would only go out of my way to recommend that you would have played up the fight that got Bruce into his dying state. You could have started toward the end, then show the reader him getting hurt and wishing for Sandy, and it would have made the moment more real and suspenseful then starting with him already in the trouble. IE if they had started Hush when Batman was already down, sure it would have been interesting but not as horrifying as watching him fall when he did. But I did really enjoy everything, thank you for writing and please please keep at it!
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  • From ANON - SoOutOfControl on July 31, 2009
    You are SO mean! Seriously! :( I NEED a sequel to this fic! It's SO unfair of you to stop it here! Ever since I found this story, I've been reading non-stop, and then you're doing THIS to me? Evil person! ... Seriously. This is so mean! :(

    Well, the story's great though xD
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  • From MiriuOniaya on May 18, 2009
    Ufgikfei WHAT? This story only has 3 reviews? Unbelievable! I’ve never strayed into much Comic fiction, but I came across your profile through one of your other stories, idr which. At first, I wasn’t sure if I wanted to read it, I was like; Batman, nah. But, then I started it, and BAM, I was hooked (o wo)

    I love how you make the characters your own, I’ve never read a Batman comic or watched the Cartoon, same with all the other heroes (and villains), so I didn’t know what to expect, but I love how you portrayed them all. I love Kal and Wally, so cuuute! And Sandy is a completely interesting person. Bruce is smart, sarcastic, sweet, and sexy. Also grumpy, stubborn and protective, but awesome none-the-less. I could focus on your portrayal of him, and not have images of George Clooney or Val Kilmer in my mind. Plus, I kind of liked Lex as the bad guy, I think it worked.

    I enjoyed the mystery that was Sandy’s past, as well as the discovery of his powers and such. The whole plot and story, it was all greatly captivating and addicting. Your writing is very good, easy to understand, flows smoothly. I loved the lemon parts, and the actions/fighting scenes and the lovey cuteness between couples, as well as the stubbornness and arguing.

    I was a Bruce fan while reading. I know Moonshadow is part of Sandy, but at times, I greatly disliked Moon and whenever he and Bruce were arguing over something, I found myself taking Bruce’s side, while many other readers probably thought Moon was in the right. The whole, you should love someone for who they are and all of who they are. I agree. But, I still found myself annoyed with Moon, and rooting for Bruce xD But it was interesting to read about their struggles, along with Wally and Kal’s reactions.

    I love a happy ending, so I loved how this story ended! Yay for Sandy and Bruce, and Wally and Kal! Even with the fights between themselves, and the badguys trying to do bad things; it all worked out! I’m glad. I had fun reading this story, and though I doubt I’ll dig into Batman fiction, I will totally fave this story and keep an eye on you.
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