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Reviews for Hamato Karai

By : MercyJinn
  • From ANON - Honey on May 01, 2016
    Hello there!. I've been reading this wonderful story thanks a friend's recommendation. I'ts a great piece and I'm looking forward to read more.
    I also want to report that recently most of the text in most of the chapters seems to be lost for some unknown reason, this has happened with other stories in this place, I hope this doesn't discourage you from writing more and perhaps reposting the previous chapters, since it would be superawesome keep reading this great fic.
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  • From ANON - sophie16 on December 02, 2015
    I truly enjoyed reading this!!! Please do more!!!
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  • From Shawnie on November 30, 2012
    I am not usually a fan of Leo-centric fics, but I am IN LOVE with this story! I would love to see more Leo/Karai fics that take place before they decide to adopt :)
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  • From Prophetella on August 02, 2010
    Here I am again! I could have sworn that I left a review about the drabble this story inspired ( http://community.livejournal.com/tmnt_tuesdays/85003.html sorry, it's f-locked for content. ). I am rewriting some of the flawed writing in my extended story so it hasn't been posted yet... but I was thrilled to see this continued! Summary{Leonardo is considering the Utrom Shredder's revelation of alternate universes containing them (Turtles Forever) and he got a glimpse of Karai looking grumpy at the wedding ceremony. Understandably, it gives him some pause. (But, Raph is able to distract him by playing a bit with imitating her voice -- then it gets smutty cause Raph figured out Leo's mating season has come a bit early and intends to enjoy it.)} Then the damn thing spawned 2 years of backstory cause the guys seemed to be talkative that day. Come see the dA account where this smut will be posted:: http://prophetella.deviantart.com/ contact me via Oraclesparkle(at)yahoo.com (cause your email is hidden) if you have any objections or one of the IM programs mentioned on the profile there. I'M THRILLED with chapter 15 and that Leo got a clue from the cutest OC I have evar seen! He'll make a great papa but I fully expect him to have trouble-- if he can see the conditions of a crowded orphanage first hand-- with sticking to just one kiddo.
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  • From Recey2010 on June 25, 2010
    amazing just absolutely amazing and i mean truly i am in love with this fic and as i read i didnt want it to end. the story is sooo sexy yet soo sweet. i love that leo requested a girl PLease UPDATE SOON Recey2010 out
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  • From brainfear on May 22, 2010
    A child into the mix eh? I hope that doesn't stop the crazy smut! ;o)

    ch19
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  • From brainfear on May 09, 2010
    Oi oi! I'll be happy to read the mating season scene! I'm so friggin' happy you updated this, by the way!

    ch 18

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  • From YoukoTaichou on February 13, 2010
    I give this fic 100/10. The characters stay in character. Plenty of drama. And it was so realistic I could actually see it happening. Please don't let this be the end, the fic must go on!
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  • From brainfear on February 06, 2010
    So amazing! She finally said those 3 words! I hope this isn't the end of the story! I love this fic so much! You captured Leo and Karai so beautifully!

    ch16
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  • From brainfear on October 25, 2009
    Ahh! Chapter 15 was great! More please!
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  • From brainfear on April 22, 2009
    More more!

    ch14
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  • From ANON - JadeRaven on April 06, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE!!! PRETTY PLEASE? OKAY I'LL SEE IF I CAN GET YOU YOUR OWN MUTANTION LAB OR SOMETHING HOW ABOUT THAT??

    Sorry, my muse and I are greatly enjoying this story, and she can't wait to see what happens next. This is a great story so far. And I am ashamed to say from what little I do know about Karai this story seems pretty accurate to her personality. I think she is a good character but Amazon is taking it's sweet time sending me the new turtle series so all I know about her I know from the 2007 movie. But I think the story is really good.
    And yes despite the fact the bastard was trying to make both their lives a living hell and the fact Leonardo probably would've killed said Bastard himself if he had the opportunity Karai probably made the right choice.
    But it's one more thing that let's us know how much, despite the fact that this was an arranged marriage, Karai has grown to love Leonardo. Although she has yet to say the words out loud.
    Well thanks for a great story and I hope more comes soon.

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  • From brainfear on February 20, 2009
    Yes! Thanks for updating!

    ch13
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  • From ANON - Kismet on September 20, 2008
    Oh, how I'm enjoying this! We finally, FINALLY get to the point where Karai is open about her affection (okay, maybe too strong a word) toward Leonardo, and you throw this snag in there! The backstory about this ex-fiance is believable, and I even imagine the Karai would have been allowed to kill the guy off after enough time had passed that his remaining resources would go to her and her Father. I like how you've written Leo characteristically concerned, but not overbearing. I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - brainfear on August 14, 2008
    Thanks for the update!

    ch11
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