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Reviews for Stellar Seduction

By : Amarin
  • From ANON - sasunnach9 on November 23, 2005
    I really, really tried to read this, but I couldn't continue, partly due to my own fault, actually. You see, I went to "Other Comics," although I don't know why it's "Other" and I no sooner muttered to myself that there was no LSH, when I went to Comic Crossovers and saw your story, first listed, proclaiming the Legion of Superheroes. Brainiac 5 is actually my favorite, so you hooked me right in.

    I understand your reasoning about why he's green, but remember, copper-based blood, ala Vulcans, could do the same thing. Also, I don't recall him descending from plants. He's the fourth or fifth clone or descendant or what-have-you from the original Brainiac, an arch-enemy of our "present day" Superman, and I don't remember them mentioning that.

    Also, our sun is a yellow-white DWARF, it's certainly not a yellow GIANT. Too many little things like that finally drove me off; even going in with the idea, This is AU, didn't help any.

    As for the actual WRITING, it wasn't bad at all; almost-perfect spelling (eg, you had "defiantly" not "definitely" at one part), grammar, syntax, all acceptable (and I'm a spelling/grammar Nazi, too).

    Oh, I forgot to add about "partly due to my own fault." You see, I used to live and breathe LSH, but that was in the 70's and early 80's (you know, back in the day when Mike Grell drew them and the stories were freakin' AWESOME!) I have to admit, I recognize the names, but I can't put the names to the superheroes. I had to give up 'cuz I was losing track of who was whom.
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