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Reviews for Mary Jane's Tangled Web

By : superbang
  • From Valiant on May 26, 2008
    Wow this story was really hot! I have a thing for Venom so you KNOW I had to take a gander at this story. God DAMN it was good.
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  • From ANON - reviewing person on January 10, 2006
    i'd just like to say that i have been reading this for a while now, and love it. i wonder if Venom misses her...
    well, update soon and i love what you have done so far.
    from
    a reviewing person
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  • From ANON - Belle on January 08, 2006
    Wow! That was a great story. Amazingly sexy. And I liked how you kept everyone pretty close to as-in character as possible so the story didn't feel like it was just people with the same looks and names acting out in a porno or something. I hope you continue to write more. You did a great job.
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  • From ANON - Kinky Penguin on December 23, 2005
    Great writing, even though I'm not a huge fan of MJ/Peter. I know someone else requested it so *shrug* I look forward to whatever you post next, and I guess my penguins and I can be patient.
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  • From superbang on December 22, 2005
    Okay, I'm lazy and the last chapter is a bookended version of "Happy... Tiger". I think it works either way but then again I don't read 'em. Enjoy!
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  • From ANON - Kinky Penguin on December 15, 2005
    OMG! That was amazing! Eeee, Venom is s-ex-y! *giggle* So what happened? Did the symbiote bond to MJ? What's going to happen at Oscorp? Norman's kinda sexy, too... *ish a super-villain groupy* Anyway, if this is the end, you must write sequel now. My penguin army commands it! Five stars, and kudos.
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  • From ANON - Sandman on December 15, 2005
    Great Ending! I like how the story is finite, but open for more.
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  • From ANON - TVO on December 15, 2005
    Yikes. Just yikes.

    Its not that the writing is bad superbang. Its really very good and very erotic. I'm just disturbed by Venom's rape of Mary Jane and Silver Sable's rape of Spidey. What's worse is how willing MJ was over it and even enjoyed it.

    But yeah, I think it'd be really awesome if you could just do a straight Mary Jane/Peter(Spidey) pairing and sort of...not acknowledge this one. I think reading this, your brief references to Peter/MJ is what had me interested and salivating the most. So if you do any more stuff...I think that'd be awesome if you just gave Peter/MJ a try. For one thing there's not NEARLY enough of it out there.

    But great job with this despite my differences with the content.
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  • From ANON - TVO on December 12, 2005
    You know based off this fanfic, I'd much rather see what you could do with Peter and Mary Jane rather than Peter and Venom. I'm somewhat disturbed with how easily Mary Jane gives in sexually to Eddie Brock/Venom even if its to save her husband. She says it feels like cheating...well uh...it was cheating.

    And it looks like Silver Sable wants some action with Silver Sable...hey wouldn't mind seeing that, especially after Mary Jane cheated on him.
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  • From anacsadder on December 11, 2005
    My review got erased before.
    She thinks he's repulsive? I think Venom's hot. Of course, I also have a thing for demon hentai. Anyway, I can't wait to see the rest of this. Updated soon, please!
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  • From ANON - hibimo on December 10, 2005
    freaking awesome! :D waiting for it to continue.. i really do.. and i bet many other do as well. ;) keep up the good work!
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  • From superbang on December 06, 2005
    Hi everybody,

    I've never gotten so much e-mail. Problem is it'a all hate mail. "TO BE CONCLUDED..." seems to angered a great deal of people.

    I assure you that the story is not "OVER". This story arch is ending, but a new one will begin. And it will build off of the events of this one.

    I'm very open to suggestions actually. If you have any pairings or situations you'd like to see give me an e-mail or leave them here.

    Thank you everyone for reading.

    PS - If you are the artist who sent me the fan art, please contact me about permission to post it on the web. Lot's of people ask for it, but I need your permission.
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  • From ANON - ultimawing on November 30, 2005
    I like your story keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Draguna on November 21, 2005
    awesome chapter, please update soon!
    from
    Draguna
    (read my story if u can lol)
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  • From ANON - screamguy on November 19, 2005
    O-O What happens?!Argh! great fic by the way,I really like the pairing ^_^. Plz update soon this is awesome.
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