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Reviews for Smell of lust

By : mort051082
  • From shadowfiredragon on April 26, 2008
    great story so far. i hope you update soon

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2007
    i like this stiry. update. by the way your english is pretty good so don't worry about it.
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  • From ANON - Dude on October 28, 2005
    Why arne't you continuing this story!? WHAT"S WRONG!!! CONTINUE.... your putting this story off!
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  • From ANON - Dude on October 24, 2005
    continue damnit!
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  • From Pndrgn on September 06, 2005
    Ah dude you can't do this to me!! This is really good and I am all caught up in the story and you end it on me!! Update soon please please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jerky on August 20, 2005
    Lust? No love? stories with no love or no meaninful emotions are worthless. And all those author notes were irksome and too frequent. Without love, your fic is garbage. Without meaning. Without taste
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  • From ANON - amanda on August 17, 2005
    please u gotta write another chapter. please email me when u do. i love it!
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  • From ANON - Glenn on August 15, 2005
    Not bad. Flow needs work. Your explations should be at the end of the chapter not through out it because it brakes up the flow of the story. You need to pick a different color for lust because pink is happy's color but other wise I liked her outfit. I hope to read more of the story. Good luck signed a fan of Raven
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  • From BobsThalamus on August 14, 2005
    A good start. I would remove any writer/audience commentary, though, since it breaks the flow of the story... maybe tuck your comments in at the end.
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  • From ANON - Miraku on August 13, 2005
    Very very VERY good job please continue, id like to see how this one plays out
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  • From ANON - ??? on August 12, 2005
    Pretty good so far. A few things: try and get a editor or something to fix your grammar, pretty sure a lemon needs a NC-17 setting. Keep going though.
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  • From ANON - someone you dont know on August 10, 2005
    wel, not to be a asshole or anything but ur sentence structure is kinda off. but the story is kick ass! kepp it up man!
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  • From ANON - Leviticus on August 09, 2005
    That was an awesome fic man I loved it. Keep it up man And I can't wait for the next chapter dude. Well Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - sal on August 07, 2005
    great story! keep it up hoping a threesome come up soon. ~,^
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  • From ANON - Shard on August 06, 2005
    I lovin this story already, it's great just wish there was more. Oh, I also thought you put the story line across well.
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