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Reviews for Intertwining Hearts

By : Comrade
  • From Omeganian on July 05, 2007
    Would have been nice seeing Robin make this a love square, if not a tetrahedron.
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  • From on May 14, 2007
    This just keeps getting better every time I read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2006
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  • From ANON - Robin Holmes on December 28, 2005
    I was just rereading a few of my favorites, and I rediscovered this one. JESUS CHRIST ON A STICK is that good. Hell, You could rewrite it as a non erotic love story between the three of them, and it would STILL rock. I always did see the three of them together. I LOVED it. Masterfully written
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  • From ANON - TC on December 20, 2005
    Damn. I love the writing style you employ. The plot itself was kickass too, and the detail was good. Saw a few spelling mistakes, but a good beta reader would help that. Overall, this is one of the best fics I've read in a long time.
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  • From ANON - Some guy on December 07, 2005
    Wow that was pretty good. Though i am a little for Robin. But it was his own fault i guess, if your going to continue this i would gladly read more and more! So please make a sequal or something
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  • From ANON - mr d on December 07, 2005
    Hehehe burn robin BURN!!! yeah i read this fic AGAIN its still good. honest! Ew did i just say that??!! Mein gott!
    Oh yeah just so you all know sleep is for losers! fun fact: i get an average of 2 hours of sleep every day! im on compy until about 4 am! then i go to sleep until 6 and go to school........pitufituff...im getting off track yeah my favorite part of this fic is where robin blows up and loses his mind i find that utterly hilarious...im such a sick little bastard arent i?
    Too bad theres no SEQUEL!!!! *yells last word suggestively in authors face*
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  • From ANON - angel on December 06, 2005
    that was really great I love it I wish you would do another story with them still together and they have a little girl/boy it be so cute, please I know it sounds corny but I think people would really attract to it if it had more emotions in it.
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul(unsigned) on November 30, 2005
    An intruiging Second chapter that brings to light the many conflcting emotions of human nature.
    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Dude on October 24, 2005
    YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER.... you write incredible sotires! As long as it would be for an episode! So realistic yet fantasy like! So much Drama! So much intensity! It drives me insane with every paragraph! Your really great at writing stories... well, maybe not the other stories u made but this one is a top 12 stars out of 10! AWESOME work right here!
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  • From on October 23, 2005
    I have two words to say: Fucking Perfecto! :D
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  • From ANON - Robin Holmes on October 22, 2005
    That was interesting. That touched me in a way that very few peices of work can.
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  • From ANON - Jaded on October 22, 2005
    Fuck!! Were you writing a novel?!? Lol, nice way to finish off the story, but I noticed that some of the beginning was unnecessary and repetitive. You described everyone’s emotions, namely Cyborg and BB’s emotions a few too many times. Cyborgs worrying and bad feelings about missing his little brother’s birthday would have been just as effective without describing it more than once.
    Lol, you didn’t paint a very flattering picture of Robin in this one either. I doubt how they could even function as a team with as self involved a leader he is. You really hate the pour guy. Your depiction of Cyborg was refreshing and the trinity of love was also really well described, though BB described his love for his goddesses a little too often, never adding anything to what he already stated, but he was well liked. I am still unsure on how to feel about Star and BB, but I could see it as a good thing, but I still can’t figure out why I like it or how it would happen. Good story to read, but it was freaking forever to get through. This could have been a few chapters, easier to manage, but then you lose the whole epilogue idea. ah well. Nice book you have here. Please don't be misinterpret my reaction by my opening lines, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Really amazing. Looking forward to more of your works.

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  • From BrianChattillon on October 21, 2005
    I have read upto it's epolouge.
    A well thought out peice of fanfiction.
    I am impressed by the depth of charaterisation.
    Better than my attempts indubitablly
    Kudos.
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From ANON - sinkore on October 21, 2005
    love your stories keep writing
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