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Reviews for Hell On earth

By : Lemonzluver
  • From ANON - Nirvana-X on January 01, 2007
    You dont suck, you never sucked, you rule, remember that!
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  • From ANON - killyjoy on October 05, 2006
    That is weird, I sound exactly like your sister... I'm good at math (honors class, woot!), I write well, I write fanfics, I make graphics, I'm lazy as all hell, the only difference is that I can't live without hot angsty yaoi lemons. >.< I need them to make my computer lemony fresh.
    This isn't really much of a reveiw so far... Hmmm.
    Right well, it was short (nothing wrong with that), but you had a lot of typos (maybe you should get a beta), and Slade seems a little OOC (not much though). There you go, constructive critisism at it's best! >.
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  • From ANON - Some Guy on September 27, 2006
    You're a girl? I never would've guessed that. The story is great, it's a real turn-on.
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  • From ANON - animeenthusiest on September 17, 2006
    good work dude. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Some guy on September 14, 2006
    Torture and humiliation? I love it.
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  • From ANON - Some Guy on September 12, 2006
    Ok, it's not bad but look closer at the spelling of your words next time and make it longer, update soon please.
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