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Reviews for Demonic lust

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  • From ANON - Wayne on March 02, 2016
    Um, is there a reason why I can only see the first 1 or 2 lines on each chapter instead of the whole story like I used to? Has this site like don goofed or something because I've tried reading other fics and the same thing is happening
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  • From mike on November 14, 2013
    This was an awesome story I am telling you but I agree this cannot be the end will raven go towards jinx and apologize and try to explain seems a shame to end this story like this I am hoping that you will add another few chapters in it. Beast far out and raven and jinx both half demons. I am a huge fan of teen titans and now these stories
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  • From ANON - derek on September 13, 2013
    It was a great story. I really liked the teen titans,
    Especially raven and beast boy. you need to continue the story.
    Jinx needs to know what's going on, raven and beast are awesome characters and the story was good accept the typing. Need to work on that
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  • From Zarrthtion on September 12, 2009
    that story was very nice and had a good hook 2 it i jus hope there's more i really want to kno what happens
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  • From warprince2099 on November 25, 2008
    Hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Omeganian on May 08, 2008
    Looks like some matters have to be cleared out. Hope I don't have to wait too long.
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  • From shadowfiredragon on April 17, 2008
    this is a great story i hope you add more to it soon

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  • From TheWarGeneral on August 31, 2007
    This story is great please update soon.
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  • From happygirl24 on August 15, 2007
    wow this is good i hope you continue this
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  • From Nunzio on August 12, 2007
    I'm sorry but I really do have to agree with Yami_joeys_dog, this story bashes Robin by having him act totally out of character in every way just because you want Beast Boy to look as badass as possible. You've also made Beast Boy act nothing like Beast Boy because again, despite it is totally out of character, you want him to look badass.

    You really have to work on characterization.
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  • From Malcore on August 11, 2007
    Alright...that was wrong of me...and i take it back..this isn't a piece of shit.
    Look, this story does have it's great things going for it, but shitting all over Robin like this is bull. and he wouldn't of backed down to beast, because Robin has faced far worse.
    But i do like your starfire, it reminds me of the starfire from the comics. All in all, if you could have robin grow a pair, and stand up to Beast, even if he gets his ass kicked, and maybe stop being such a allround pussy,plus tone down the hero worship of Beast...it would make it a better story.
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  • From Malcore on August 11, 2007
    This was a fucking piece of shit, that only hero worshiped Beast boy all the way. i only read it, hoping you would do smarten up. I hate this entire story, Robin doesn't deserve this shit, and you should of just wrote him out in the first chapter instead of this bullshit.
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  • From devil on July 21, 2007
    i'll admit that i'm a very picky person when it comes to stories, but i think this is decent, could prolong the sex scenes a little and a bit more detail at parts but all in all its a good read, keep up the good work
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  • From Nunzio on June 28, 2007
    I've got to say I'm disappointed after reading this story. You've obviously have great potential and talent as a writer but this story seems to be hitting the biggest cliche Teen Titans lemons are known for:

    Every character has had a total personality change: Beast Boy is no longer a vegetarian comedian, Raven is over sexed, Robin is acting like an asshole for no reason (That is way overused in this genre).
    I hope I'm not being to harsh but I'm just trying to help out a little. Like I said before you've got great potential just try and avoid these cliches in the future.
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  • From warprince2099 on June 25, 2007
    That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(can you Plz add Starfire to the Pairing plz???)
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