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Reviews for Raven's Wings

By : Gavin
  • From ANON - AngelicTenshi on February 06, 2006
    I loved this story, it was really good. Forget what the others say, I say continue, i'm dying to see what happenes next. ^_______^
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  • From ANON - Maya on February 03, 2006
    No no no no Fucking No! Jesus Fucking Christ! Another, ANOTHER fucking story where someone puts themselves in a story because they have a boner for a character, and not only that, make themselves sooooo perfect that they make Jesus look like a barfly. Get with the program, or check yourself into a cartoon detox clinic. Jesus...
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  • From ANON - quamp on February 03, 2006
    You have a lot of potential but a few minor things are hanging you up here.
    The first paragraph is what we call a text block of doom - way too long. You should separate it more.
    It's pretty obvious that Gavin is a Marty Stu. Nobody outside of the story likes a Marty Stu.
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