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Reviews for Just A Game [Changed from 'Touch Me']

By : emania
  • From ANON - Silverkitsune77 on October 12, 2014
    Love it, and I want more please.
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  • From HenshinDaisuke on October 26, 2012
    rather good story, would like to see it continued at some point
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  • From BellaTragedia on July 08, 2010
    AMAZINGLY HOT. God. You just need to keep writing. I don't even like this pairing and I LOVED IT. Lol.
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  • From Rosewolf28 on June 06, 2007
    Very awesome. Sexy without being over done. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From warrenzimmerman on January 30, 2007
    that was BEAUTFUL but i was really hoping for sex or even completion but still that was great slow and hot next time have then reach all the way and make robin a little dirty, a little perverted :)
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  • From Amarin on January 12, 2007
    Wow. That was amazingly hot and surprisingly in character. It was also a most original plot. I hope you've signed up for the thirty lemons challenge so I can read more of your stuff! :)
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  • From ANON - basteng on October 06, 2006
    great fic!...love the robinraven couple!!!...so adorable..

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  • From ANON - seb on August 31, 2006
    i really enjoyed this fic, well written and no obvious out of character actions or lines, hope to see more
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  • From ANON - Amber Moon on August 04, 2006
    O...
    My...
    God...

    THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on July 27, 2006
    An awesome story, sublimely erotic. Well done!
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  • From ANON - pinklilyrose on July 24, 2006
    Awesome story....Raven/Robin combo is the greatest...they fit together so well..great story. Can't wait for another one
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  • From NinjaDiner on July 16, 2006
    First, thank you for alerting me to the existence of the 30 Lemons community. I think I'm gonna join.
    Also, in the interest of improving my own karma to get more reviews myself, I've decided to get off my hypocrite ass and do some reviewing of my own.
    I like what you have here; your inexperience shows only in your lack of bad habits. I'll be frank - if this is too much information, let's not forget that we are authors of porn - the story made me feel dirty more than it aroused me, and failed to really satisfy. I can't fault you on those points; the story feels more like an appetizer or teaser for more involved lemons to come.
    Your opening set you apart, not because it was particularly brilliant but because it showed that you, at least, know what "pacing" is. Drawing out the wait made the ultimate payoff much more effective. I was a little unclear what Robin and Raven's actual relationship was at the beginning, so I would suggest making it clearer earlier on where they stand and where Robin wants to take it. On those lines, I don't remember hearing what they were wearing if not their uniforms, and especcially in a story so involved with clothes and the bypassing thereof, I'd like a clearer mental image.
    I like that neither of the characters get into the movie; it's a more convincing reaction to porn than I could usually hope for on this site.
    Robin's orgasm seemed a little sudden and frivolous; I liked the banter that followed, but the orgasm itself, I don't know - I didn't feel it. Along those lines, about the stain on Robin's pants: even when a full load is blown uninterrupted into one's boxers, the resulting mess rarely produces an outward stain. If the male in question isn't wearing underwear, then yes, a stain would soak through, but take my word for it: semen is too thick and gloopy to visibly soak through both boxers and jeans. Yes, this is nitpicking, but readers gobble up nitpicky details! Leave in the stain if you want, but you might to say that Robin doesn't wear underwear.
    I might have more for you later; like I said, though, this fic feels like an appetizer, and I eagerly await the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Carlito on July 14, 2006
    Great stuff here, better then the majority of stuff on this site. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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  • From ANON - Fogu-s_Tofu (not logged in) on July 14, 2006
    Though i'm not normally a fan of the R/R pairing, this was very good. You going to have a sequel or an update?
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  • From ANON - darkknight06 on July 13, 2006
    Hands down one of the best Teen Titans fan fiction I have read on aff.net, its authors like you that keep my coming back to this site. I Really hope you keep up the work, and look forward to any of your future works.
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