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Reviews for I Love You

By : eris247
  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    amazing =]
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  • From elegyenigma on November 02, 2006
    Well as far as writing goes it's very well written. But, being the critic I am by nature, I do have to point out the bad things. You do something known as plot jumping...which is pretty much self descriptive. One moment she's in a bar. Then, she's in a fight. Those two may stack up, except the fight scene was kinda anti-climactic. No action, nothing that really gets you thinking "hell, I'm glad I'm reading this." Then there's the police station incident. I don't think that in the middle of a police station two criminals are going to be left unhandcuffed, forgotten about, and armed, regardless of the situation. Then out of nowhere it's suddenly a teleportation right into a romantic love scene, with a sex scene that only lasts a paragraph or two and is kinda lacking any real emotional interest. It almost seems bland.

    That all said, you have a talent for side-alongs, and are good with descriptions, character mentalities, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. I give you a 3/5.
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