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Reviews for Rooftop Love

By : chaos666
  • From Dancing_Blades on April 03, 2019

    Your story's gone missing. Seems to happen a lot with the older ones.


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  • From ANON - Robin Holmes on August 04, 2005
    That was good. It wasn't horrible, but it wasn't amazing either. A nice change of pace from some of the other stuff here
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  • From ANON - MadMagnum on August 02, 2005
    I thought it was pretty good.
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  • From on July 29, 2005
    Well, I'll give ya constructive criticism over all else.

    Not a fan of Rav/BB pairings myself, but I don't let personal opinions cloud judgement on the actual writings of a story.

    However, this one was bitterly short...and there wasn't really a plot...the dialogue was worse than "Debbie does dallas" mixed with a $100 budget soap opera...there was no real passion in the "sex scene," which was extremely underwritten and undescribed...it was about as erotic as a drunk redneck named Bubba passed out in a puddle of his own vomit, to be honest with you...

    However, I'm not saying for you to give up. Rewrite it, make it longer, more energetic, with more range of emotions and actions, make it extremely detailed, then come back and try me again. For now, I must vote just one star.
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  • From BrianChattillon on July 29, 2005
    Interesting and rather disspointinglly short.
    *Shrugs*
    All in all it read like PWP but I can't complain.

    Hopefully you will write a more in depth love and relationship between Raven and her Green shape shifting god?
    Although well articulated and stuff it just legft me sort numb? what's the point of one shag?

    Good so far but you can do better
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From ANON - KingofCool on July 28, 2005
    Very nice Lemon. I'm a huge fan of BB/Rae, so I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
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