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Reviews for The End

By : Alchemist
  • From ANON - GaffJuran on July 22, 2015
    The end of the world, it's funny to see a cadre of DC heroes facing an Armageddon situation and not have a plan to stop it. Of course, you went for a particular tone and you achieved it.
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  • From ANON - Yue Ryong on August 19, 2005
    Nicely written, very touching, a slight bit on the heavy handed side. The only problem is the fact that even if none of the Titans are capable of stopping the comet, there is still a substantial amount of other heroes on the planet, most significantly a Green Lantern. Even a comet of this size is nothing to a power ring, and the problem could be solved with relative ease.
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  • From ANON - voo on July 23, 2005
    I like the way you wrote this story! Yeah, its depressing and sad and not something you tend to find on here but it`s nice to find someone who put an proper plot into there story and added some sort of emotion. You do understand the characters really well and it just seems to fit how they would react to something like that. I was thinking that maybe Raven could of stopped it or Cyborg or something but i think it`s better that you had it end like that, just leaves you feeling....well....however you felt after it suppose. I think i liked Rob/Star chapter most. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Desolation on July 22, 2005
    Really liked this stoy,but Why Why Why kill everyone!?Are you makeing anymore chapters?please do....meeting in heaven or haveing the whole poulation of the Earth transported to another dimention on inpact...just some ideas:)
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  • From ANON - Some one on July 15, 2005
    This was a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tenji888 on July 14, 2005
    this was sort of hard to read. i think you need to divvy up -- put some spaces betwe. paragraphs.

    on the plus it made my heart feel warm. you really seemed tounderstand t5he personalities of the characters. i would say it DEZSERVS a second draft and a speel check.
    Ghost toasties.
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  • From ANON - Call me Jin, I like Jin on July 14, 2005
    Hey man, I love this!! All of the titans last day was amazing. Kindi of speechelss. I just love it to pieces. Starfire and Robin was bloody amazing, and so was Raven and BB. I really liked how you had Cyborg spend his last day. They were all really great.
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  • From ANON - Valkyrie on July 11, 2005
    Wouldn't Starfire just take the titans away from earth if something that bad were going to happen? Even if she considers it her home, I'm sure she wouldn't give up on life if she had the chance to save hers and Robins.

    Plus they are the titans... figure they'd have come up with some way of stopping it.

    But... then the story wouldn't be as powerful. Not a bad job.
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  • From ANON - chin on July 11, 2005
    HOWLY CWAP!! this was the most depressing thing i have eva read
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