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Reviews for Remmision

By : ubermann
  • From ANON - ???? on December 07, 2006
    more make more i totally just love this fan fic more please!


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  • From ANON - Andrew on December 07, 2006
    im am totally thrilled by this chapter i hope that you make more i have always seen slade trying to recruit beast boy and use him against the teen Titans and them trying to save him but they cant because slade could take his life away.

    Great story: i would give it 200/100
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  • From ANON - Someone and no one. on December 18, 2005
    Hi, just figured i'd toss this review in. The story idea is cool I like it, but a few things were a bit annoying to me.
    Number one, is when multiple people are speaking you break up the paragraphs, with each time a new speaker says something a new paragraph begins.

    As well sometimes the words you use are either in the wrong tense or just dont suit the flow of the story.

    And my last complaint, is please use some contractions eh? It get's a bit annoying, but isn't that big a deal. Try to write the dialogue more like the people talk and maybe put in some discreption of the scenes and people speaking?
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