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By : Malcore
  • From ANON - Dark_Metal on October 03, 2005
    good strong story, good ideas, all you have to work on is spelling
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  • From ANON - Goddess Anjanee on May 31, 2005
    Awesome story!!!

    I think you should check your spelling though. A lot of your misspelled words were due to hitting the wrong keys.

    Otherwise, everything else is right on track.

    Good job.

    Goddess Anjanee :)
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  • From KuroKen on May 29, 2005
    Grammar and spelling errors aside, it is a fun little story, a little sparse on lemony goodness, but then it is a bit of a 'niche' piece with the whole infantilism thing going on. You have managed to make it entertaining and compelling even managing to let Raven have a plausible reason (other than the kink factor) to want ot be little. Cool villains, even if most of their names were a bit ackward to pronounce.

    All in all a good read, perhaps take the time to look over you spelling and punctuation and you'll be golden.
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on May 28, 2005
    aaah the sweet, delicious pain. not so sweet i'd personally want to feel it, but...
    eh, nice fic, dude. i guess there's the happy ending i hoped for.

    *shrugs and walks away contentedly*
    it mightn't be so happy in my fic, though...
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  • From ANON - Shard on May 24, 2005
    GREAT, it was a really good chapter and ending. Still I was kinda hoping for more, maybe you'll consider continuing it some time.
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on May 18, 2005
    damn, your fic is disturbing! but i like it, nonetheless.
    BB + Rae + diapers + sex + everything else you got in there that one would find... unnerving.
    i am in no way insulting your fic though. you're a good writer. don't stop.
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  • From ANON - water spear 598 on May 12, 2005
    I really like your story you should keep updating.
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  • From ANON - RavenGothGirl on May 08, 2005
    or a treesome!

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  • From ANON - RavenGothGirl on May 08, 2005
    WOW!!!!!!!!! You did a good job with what you had. Give me that info. and i would have screwed it up. please don't do F/F or M/M okay? please dont mess it up and please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Shard on May 03, 2005
    Nice chapter, a little kinky but I really liked it. Looking forward to what happens next time. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Tohma Seguchi on April 24, 2005
    That was so cute at the end of chapter 3. I hope that Raven eventually gets her body back to normal. I wouldn't be able to live like that if I was her. Being that small again would be a pain. Star was cute in chapter two when they were buying cloths she was like the mother and Raven was her daughter. They are all being fair when it comes to Raven's state that she should be greatful. Oh well can't wait for the nect update.
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  • From ANON - Raven on April 22, 2005
    damn dude, thats great, i hope theres more to it, the only problems were the 3-4 typos i noticed *puts it on favs to wait for more*
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  • From ANON - fgh on April 05, 2005
    cool story
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 25, 2005
    awesome! it is to be continued, right? i know it has to. this may be AFF, with the sex and all, but the little girl has to have her happy ending, won't she?
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  • From ANON - juraijin1 on March 02, 2005
    I found the concept of the entire fic to be amusing. I enjoyed the little bit of spanking play, and Raven's accident(poor girl), and would like to see a bit more if at all possible. I will admit that I had some misgivings about the sex scene, but it is your story, and I just skimed over that part. I so enjoy this kind of story where chrarcters are thrust into humilating circumstaces, as long as it's not rape. Please give us more quickly.
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