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Reviews for Late night rave leads to sparks

By : JiraKainsmen
  • From on October 29, 2005
    Oh my god.

    Besides the obvious grammar and spelling errors(there's tons) the story was TERRIBLE!
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on May 01, 2005
    TORTURE ROCKS!!! GIMME MORE!
    i feel sorry for raven being yanked into that. just what is it that makes so much of us want raven and not starfire. is it her revealing clothes, her ultra-cool pwers, or is it that starfire's always so happy it scares us off?!
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  • From ANON - Fidam on April 19, 2005
    OMG! YOU'RE SO MEAN! This story is awesome, and cliffhangers are mean. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on April 19, 2005
    Ok, I don't have a problem with a non BB/Rae supporter because everyone has their own tastes, but I have a slight problem with the chapter. Did you have to make BB be so desperate as to practically rape Raven in her sleep? Grr... you mad me mad as a BB fan, not as a BB/Rae fan.

    Other than that unfortunate incedent at the end, it was a good chapter. Jira's freinds should mind their own business... or get their own girlfriends. I think that it's intereresting that there is a Tamaranian in their group. Maybe he and Star should meet and talk. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on April 09, 2005
    mr. barron, your work was very commendable i must say.
    SCREW THAT, IT WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - Asa Anderson on April 09, 2005
    That was a pretty good lemon, much better than any lemon's I've ever written!
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on April 06, 2005
    a teaspoon of darkness, a pint of hate, a cup of shades, and a dab of electricity to 'charge' things up
    these are but a few of the ingredients that make this story beautiful
    keep stirring
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 31, 2005
    hmmm...
    vampire lesbians, you're insane homey
    you're awesome, write that!

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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 25, 2005
    damn, i get crazy off many things and start to laugh at random times with NO reason whatsoever, but damn!
    ...again, shit, that list of teas nearly got me as well! this is gonna be good
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on March 24, 2005
    Good Chapter. Geez, how many different kinds of tea can they have in one place? Updae Soon! I want to see how this new romance develops.
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  • From ANON - Fidam on March 24, 2005
    Pretty good chapter, but you realize at one point, it starts the entire chapter before it. Was that supposed to be a joke because of LSD tea, or was it a mistake? Either way, i'll keep reading as long as you keep writing. But yea, thats my input.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Wolf on March 23, 2005
    Nice job, I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 21, 2005
    whoa, i'm on a review frenzy this month! and you've just been hit.
    you got a good plot in the mix, stay fresh!
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  • From on March 19, 2005
    not much to say because it was just an intro, but yea, i try to review everything because i despise people you read sumthing, then dont share their thoughts. S yea.
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