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Reviews for Passion

By : Loreley
  • From otaku330 on September 13, 2009
    0_0' WOWZERS! You've got a GREAT story going thus far! Please keep up the good work and update ASAP! *-Starts mopping up small pond of drool (from reading the story).-*
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  • From ANON - Bells on March 16, 2006
    Absolutely Spine tingling o__o;

    Erm. I wish it hadn't ended so soon. .___. write more? Please?
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  • From ANON - Josh on January 14, 2006
    Hey your writing is good hopefully you will update it soon and e-mail me when you update it at JTB8834@aol.com or RedDragonSTL19@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - jay on June 22, 2005
    delightfully dark I liked what you did with your charcters. They were flawed yet touched upon a depth substance few writers try to instill in their charcters you also managed to portay batman as dark and torn as he his yet give him a humanity few try to do successfully.;but you should escalate the violence to the same level as the sex and back story what is batman without violence it's a part of his nature instilled in himself barely beneath the surface at all times it seems you get away from this alot that could give you another edge to his needs to be understood needed ,loved etc.
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  • From ANON - RealROyMustANG on April 18, 2005
    Nicely done! I always loved Batman Beyond best of all the animated Batmans!
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  • From ANON - Casshan on March 17, 2005
    Very good chapter, a bit better then the last. Once again, Lora becomes a more complete character chapter by chapter (you got the basics of psychological domination down). Should be interesting to see what role Amanda has to play. If you're expecting any criticism (constructive or otherwise) on this chapter you're not going to get it from me. I look forward to the next chap, it should be, um... interesting.
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  • From ANON - Casshan on February 15, 2005
    Nice, convincing (and sad) backstory for Lora. You're really painting Maximus to be a peace of shit, so it should be interesting when he makes his entrance. Terry remains, determined and understandably single minded (heh). Anyway, good chapter. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Iceheart on January 09, 2005
    Don't you dare get discouraged. I have to know how it ends! Please? I am one of those people who are never satisfied till they see things through to the end. I find your writing to be very good and well thought out. Batman Beyond doesnt have many fanfics so please conitnue. I liked the show. I have to I enjoy the whole plot a great deal, so keep it up. Remember to have fun, thats what this writing fanfics is all about.

    Eagerly awaiting the next installment,

    Iceheart
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  • From ANON - Casshan on January 08, 2005
    Good chapter. I think it should occur to Terry that between himself and his alter-ego, from Lora's perspective she's skirting a two man relationship. I hope you keep writing this, I'm enjoying it a good deal and really want to see what happens as it progresses (it's one of the few regularly updated stories I come to ADFF.N for).
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  • From ANON - Jade on December 07, 2004
    Great story! Its great how you seemed to capture Terri's personality so well.
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  • From ANON - Casshan on October 30, 2004
    Nice couple of chapters there. I like how you're writing Terry, even if things are going to blow up in his face later (nice OC in Lora to). Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - C on September 13, 2004
    Nice, I like the story, yes, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Red on August 27, 2004
    Very cool so far. I was also reading this on FFN.net and was so sad it had disappeared, so I'm glad I found you again. Anyway, enough of the scary, stalkery thing, I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - steph on August 23, 2004
    hey!
    love the story! i had seen it on fanfiction.net and when it wasn't there anymore i kinda missed it. hope you update soon. i can't remember what chapter i was on in ff.net but i'm interested to see what will happen for terry and lora. 5 stars!*****
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  • From ANON - Lady Rain on August 21, 2004
    Oh my gosh!!! This was so good. I have yet to find an author who can honestly and completely capture Terry McGinnis attitude in it's fullest sarcastic greatness. I mean seriously, I could so see the entire thing in animation as if it was actually made and hear the voice actors as if they were reading a little script for it.

    Please keep up the good work!!! Don't stop!
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