Oh, man! they just took a trip to incest-city; this pairing is out of the twilight zone.

I simply skimmed it, but that was one odd relationship going on in this.

First off, thank you for your reveiw on my own story last month. It inspired me to get back to it.
I couldn't figure out a way message you on this site, so I settled for returning the favor.

Obviously you wrote this before Nora's relationship with Iris got explored by the show, but curiosity was an excellent tact to take. On that note, it might have worked better if you drew out Nora's obliviousness to Iris' come on. She starts just wanting to know what her mom is like and has a few drinks, starts to know her as a person and then hit her with the seduction. It makes the jump to incest a little less abrupt, but i guess it would also considerably extend that first scene. (Maybe there's a reason my own stories keep trending longer and longer.)

I loved how Nora's attempts to talk herself out of it are half-hearted at best. The internal back and forth was pure Allen family nervous chatter. Similarly, she constantly waffles back and forth about thinking of Iris as her mom and just another woman.

The sex was great (who doesn't want a peice of Iris' ass?) and it was paced well enough that it didn't feel like a superspeed "slam-bam-thank-you-mam." I almost feel as if Nora's reluctance was a little undercut by that fact that its mostly stuff she does to Iris. Things could still end with Iris getting it, but I feel that Nora's inner monologue would fit better if Iris had stayed as the agressor a bit longer or at least spent more time as a participant than just as a recipient. Then again, I like switches and turned tables, so maybe I'm projecting.

Overall, the story felt more like an introduction to Nora's timetravel shenanigans than a stand alone. It practically begs for continuation. Besides the obvious reveal of her true identity, there's plenty that could be done with how she interacted with the entire cast before then. And if you don't want to go with "Nora works her way through Team Flash" you definitely need to deal with the reveal of her identity. Whether mommy Iris needs to punish her or needs to convince Nora to keep the secret, there's plenty of drama (and sex) to be had.

Again, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my story.

Any chance for a part 2 where iris finds out but Nora seduces her to do it again. This doc is awesome, would be awesome for an addition

This is a great and well wanted story. Hope you continue it after iris finds out Nora’s identity but Nora seduces her anyway

Because I would really like to see another chapter even if it’s just 1 one more.the story is so good that’s why.please thanks

First I want to say,this was a great story.I really love it.the details in the story were amazing.i also have a question.is this a one shot or would make this into a two shot or a story.

I felt that the Iris-Nora issue was resolved a little too easily in the show so I definitely enjoyed this alteration to it. For any potential continuations I'm curious as to whether or not Nora will bottom or if she's a solely a top.

I was just thinking about how this pairing could work, and you totally nailed it. Such a wickedly wonderful idea, executed beautifully. I wish some things could have been longer, particularly the strap-on anal which is my favourite, but it was more than made up for with that ending. I mean, Nora having her Mom going ass to mouth while her Dad was in the next room? That's so awesome! So much so this may be my favourite thing you've ever done.

I really hope this continues for at least another chapter, as imagine Iris learning that she had a one night stand with her own daughter? Or better yet, that she's been having an affair with her, but even after learning the truth she just can't stop, because Nora is just too good. And Nora is just as addicted to the fun they've been having, and determined to make sure that when she returns to the future her Mom will be waiting for her as her eager little fuck toy.