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Reviews for Crocs sewers

By : DirtySlapz
  • From ninesenshi on November 07, 2018

    Decent concept but some problems.  Note the following passage;

    She got to 7 inches worth or meat before gagging and retracting off of his dick. After all, she wasn't used to such large appendages. The biggest she ever had was Batman's 6.10 inches, but this was simply enormous in comparison

    Dont do this, these numbers make your story childish and silly.  Especially .1, really!?

    Later on you list a bunch of sex acts including Selena losing her anal virginity.  Don't summarize it, write out that scene.  Sex needs to be descriptive and detailed.


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