Reviews for The Bothersome BugBy : TimedWatcher & Witiko |
Needs more sex
More of Raven with the regular guy
Really liked this story.
Beast boy is an annoying faggot just like in the cartoon.
Please write another chapter,
One of the best fanfics I've ever read, keep up the great work, I eagerly await new chapters!
Great work, mostly in the context that I haven’t seen anyone else make this kind of content. As far as constructive criticism goes I haven’t much to offer. You draw the scenes very well using your vancular.
What would enhance this website as a platform would be adding some images. You don’t have to have a billion, but it really means a lot to me as a reader.
I’m not sure about raven being so submissive where I have known her to be in comics/tv shows to be a stronger character. However, you’ve made your choice. So this can’t really count as a constructive bit, more of a request. Make beast cuckqueen Raven with Terra?
Horseshoes
Was a good read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Not a bad story for out of nowhere. Even I though I understand the need to explain the scene.
Some details weren't needed. But it was still a good read thank you.
A mediocre waste of 5 minutes and 49 seconds. I would rather shove a vial of hydrocloric acid up my ass than read this again.
I really like this story. I hope to see more Raven content from you!
Pretty good read. Though the story could simply end how it is, I'd like to see more of a resolution for BB instead of him being damned to a life of eternal cuckery.
More
Pretty good, just needs some grammar checking.
nay
Kiss yourself
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