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Reviews for Adaptation

By : Beast_Dude666
  • From Mattaboy on October 04, 2013
    Very nice, I noticed you like BB x Raven but I'd like to see some chapters focusing on Robin x Starfire as well.
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  • From ANON - Greene on October 02, 2013
    I applaud you sir. That was fantastic. This just keeps getting better. Seriously man, keep it up! I'm loving this. It's smutty, fluffy, and extremely hot. I'm looking forward to see what all you're going to do next. I'm genuinely excited to find out.

    If you're still interested in any random requests or ideas, then the couple I can think of off the top of my head are:

    -Raven's multiple emotions from her magic mirror. I've always liked the idea of Raven giving Beast Boy a 'present'/'reward' or something in the form of letting him go inside her mind and have all kinds of kinky and very different kinds of sex depending on each emotion.

    -Raven, Jinx, Argent at once (the three 'Alternative/Gothy' style chicks all at once, it's something I find very appealing). Maybe magic futa/dickgirl or maybe strap-ons. Whatever works for you man. Raven's magic could be used to make the strap-ons feel/function like real dicks.

    Seriously though man, either way, this shit is great. Please keep going.

    Oh, and I think the thing where no matter what Raven only kisses BB is extremely hot in it's own way. It's something as simple as kissing among all of the kinky sex, but it's still exclusive to the two of them, and that's actually really hot (and fluffy) in a unique way.

    Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter! I actually haven't been this excited about reading smut in awhile, so kudos to you.

    --Oh, there's also that one other idea about BB using his powers to give himself more 'beastly' qualities, but I've noticed that your other story (I've been reading Safeword as well) didn't have anything like that either. So if it turns out that the pseudo-beastly stuff just isn't your thing, then that's totally understandable.

    Later dude! Fap on!
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  • From Mattaboy on October 02, 2013
    If you're still looking for more ideas, how about Raven summoning her other personalities for a selfcest orgy or how about the guys and gals swapping genitals so they can see what it's like to fuck and get fucked?
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  • From Mattaboy on September 27, 2013
    I gotta say, I'm really loving your fics. You really know how to write kinky material and still manage to keep true to the characters' personalities. I'm really looking forward to seeing future updates from you.

    If you're still looking for more ideas to use, I'd recommend having Robin, Starfire, and Beast Boy start to follow Raven's example and go around au natural. Also I'd love to see Terra join the join.
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  • From ANON - Idea on September 20, 2013
    Argent with a strap-on.

    Beast Boy with a horsecock.

    Threesome with Argent and Beast Boy.

    Aerial sex with Starfire.

    Fura/Dickgirl sex with Ravager.

    Any and all combinations of everything above.
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  • From YummyYumi on September 16, 2013
    I am loving this so far, and looking forward to the next chapter. In your most recent chapter you said you were running out of ideas, so I thought I would give you a few ideas & kinks of my own, if you want to do them.
    One of your reviewers suggested including titans east, so maybe they could hold a private party or something titans east & some more superheros, during which Raven could make her first appearance naked or nearly naked in front of a small crowd of people she trusts. What she could do after that, masturbating or having sex with Beastboy while the crowd watches or maybe even just staying at the party while being the only one naked, whatever you want, that part is up to you.
    Another request, Maybe at some point, gradually, over a few chapters there could be some buildup to a big event, nothing too much at first, maybe starting by going out to fight villains in a short skirt with no bra or panties), removing the glamor over the island completely, little things until finally going in public, out in the streets, completely naked. It would be sweet to see the 4 titans supporting her & encourage her, cos she would be really excited but nervous at the same time.
    If you are not up for writing scenes like that I totally understand and I will still read and review when i can.. I look forward to the next chapters very much!
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  • From ANON - Green on September 14, 2013
    I don't always review stories, but I think this one is absolutely fantastic. You really have a lot of potential here, and I'm really impressed. I definitely look forward to reading more, and fapping more. I also really like the way you've given Beast Boy and Raven their own special connection. It adds an extra element of enjoyment from a more emotional aspect.

    As far as ideas or suggestions go, here are some of the first things that came to my mind:
    -Beast Boy mildly using his powers to alter his attributes to give him some more 'beast-like' attributes. (This could just be something that happens between Raven and Beast Boy, another more 'personal' activity.)
    -Raven using her magic to temporarily manifest her own cock.

    Those are just the two right off the top of my head. Even if you don't use those, I hope you keep writing. This is fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Harem Lover on September 08, 2013
    Why only the five of them. Terra shows up and joins in the fun. Lets not forget titans east and all the others.
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  • From ANON - verifiaman on August 28, 2013
    Nice! i like this!
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  • From ANON - verifiaman on August 27, 2013
    Do you do requests? my email is verifiaman@yahoo.com
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