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Reviews for Scarlet Starlight

By : DarthMeow504
  • From MF22 on March 26, 2014
    I guess I can see where you're coming from, but for someone who's led the team for x-number of years, it seemed as if Scott was far too much of a weakling, although I now see your motivation. You're right in that it does open certain avenues, and tensions can arise due to choices made. That being said, I hope he actually grows a pair and tells Emma to fuck off, or does something to salvage some form of dignity, because at this moment, he's embarrassing his gender. All I can say is thank God it's a story, because I cringe whenever I see someone that fucking spineless and pathetic in the real world.

    As for the Shinra/Avalanche group thing, I'm not familiar with it. I don't know where it came from, as I haven't been reading for quite some time now. Oh well; guess I know now.
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  • From redsliver on March 06, 2014
    Just read the newest chapter. I enjoy this story and when the next instalment comes out I'll eagerly devour it, but part of me isn't convinced about its merits. You're very explicit in your forewords about the changes and alterations you make to characters. I know they're coming when you make, what I see as, very questionable decisions. Feminizing Barrett still confounds me. And, while that is foremost, there are other such moments. Still, you're very easy to read, you seem to be handling a superhuman sized world with excellent control. I look forward to more even though I'm still very much on the fence about the story.
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  • From MF22 on January 18, 2014
    For the most part, I've enjoyed reading the fic, I really did. It paints quite a vivid picture, and it makes for good reading. It's not all sex, but also real-life struggles. I like the balance. That being said, I do have some gripes about it. Please don't take it as an affront, as it's not intended to be. Anyway, they are:

    1) Scott's portrayal. Say what you will about Emma; I've never really cared for her. But you have Scott basically being a eunuch, a spineless wimp who cannot think or act for himself. He has character flaws, no doubt. But the way you have Scott acting and the subsequent treatment of him, you might as well have simply killed him off. It would've been far quicker and more merciful than what you have him doing and going through. And I really don't like how Jean merely gave up. No fighting for him, no trying to see if something was out of sorts, or raising her legitimate concerns about how she feels the relationship could be becoming stagnant. Nope, she just said a part of her wished she had chosen Warren instead. It's like you have an axe to grind against Scott. Like I said I don't care for Emma. But Scott did not deserve what you were doing.

    2) Thor is also out of character. Why have him join a group of terrorists? They may have the best intentions in mind, but they're still known terrorists, and having Thor joint them was almost eyebrow raising as how you have Scott being portrayed in the story. To be quite honest, when I read that, I had to gloss over the steamy parts with the members of the group. I simply could not get into it with the whole Thor thing going on.

    As I said, I don't mean for it to be construed as an affront. I simply couldn't overlook those areas. I look forward to further chapters, but I had to get those concerns off my chest.
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  • From Royboy on June 11, 2013
    Great new chapter. If there's anything I love, it's seeing X-girls get it hardcore. :)
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on April 13, 2013
    Its good to see that your still writing DarthMeow.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on November 01, 2012
    You really DON'T like Emma Frost do you?

    I will admit that the ending of the Treat Chapter with Selene and the Red Queen was a genuine and pleasant surprise though.
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on October 31, 2012
    Now I have an addiction to reading Emma getting owned, humiliated and fucked as a Hellfire whore... thank you very much =P

    I seriously loved that beyond anything I have ever read.

    I hope there is a way I can convince you to make a spin-off of that?!
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  • From redsliver on September 01, 2012
    I just finished reading your 30 chapters. I am quite fond of the story but am uncertain as to whether its good or great. There's a very obvious ebb and flow to your story: sex in which many bisexual women and upwards of two men perform 69s and receive anal sex, ungodly amounts of exposition, short bursts of action, celebratory sex, wash rinse repeat. It works but it's obvious in its use.

    You describe well, vividly. I am quite impressed when you take the time to set the stage. Something I always gloss over in my own writing. Bravo.

    You use so many characters I love (Spider-woman and Zatanna being my personal favorites [I have Thor's tastes]). The inclusion of the Chrono Trigger girls was a personal bright point. Additionally, I love the way you integrated the worlds together. I was quite impressed by the way Thunderans were implemented. ShinRa and AVALANCHE entered the story well (The relations to Thor and Mr Fantastic was great) but I found Baretta and Sephia Roth off putting. Not the shemale nature but the decision to have the shemale nature, I suppose.

    One thing I'd like to commend you for is the name alterations of some characters. Carol Ferris to Ferra is the most obvious choice. The name changed but you didn't immediately drop the way you had been describing she and Danvers, allowing for a slow and complete integration. One question I have is why Marle became Mari? It's not as if there was another Marle in competition.

    Anyway, I enjoyed the read. Please continue to write and I shall continue to read.
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  • From Ragnarok on May 31, 2012
    I have no idea why this fic has only eight reviews. It's incredibly good!

    For starters, you matched a lot of different heroes I never thought would sleep together, and I loved it (just too bad Dazzler never really got her share!). I am a fan of Marvel, so while the fic stayed within the Marvel Universe's boudnaries it was Top 5 to me! When DC came along, it wasnt a big hit, but all those other guests make the story very hard to keep up, and hard to stick to one favorite character!

    Aside from that, I simply love how you describe sex scenes. I think you are the best writer around these parts when it comes to straight-out fucking, from what they do to the words you use. One scene stands out, from Illyana's buttstuffing. That made me 'Wow...". It was simply incredible, from how she thought about it (mindset), the tidbits of background we got from her (backstory) and the actual fucking, you had all my favorite things there! I cannot stress this enough, it was mindblowing perfect.

    I would love to persuade you into trying an off-shot series focusing on some X-Men/Marvel Heroes! I could even illustrate them.
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  • From SexyLizard on May 24, 2012
    There was less romance or sex in this chapter than I was expecting.
    It was still good though.
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  • From SexyLizard on May 22, 2012
    The new chapter was good, although I am unfamiliar with the starring characters.
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  • From Royboy on May 10, 2011
    With an ending like that, I am eagerly awaiting chapter 24.
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  • From SexyLizard on April 27, 2011
    DarthMeow, is the female clone of Thanos canon or your creation?
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  • From ANON - TVO on March 27, 2011
    Wow that was epic. That's all I can really say. Thanks for the update and can't wait for the next chapter.


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  • From DSTorres on March 11, 2011
    Interesting story thus far.
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