Reviews for OathboundBy : rubicon541 |
This is one of the best stories I have ever read, quite apart from it being the best sexual interpretation of Wonder Woman that I have read.
Please can you update this. I beg of you.
I must have read it about 12 times, now.
Thank you ever so much for writing. The premise is so brilliant, & the execution so nuanced, realistic, & gripping. As well as effortlessly saucy.
Love the story i hope you keep updating.
This is awesome
wish there was more
Thinking about it, a literally unbreakable oath is extremely useful.
Diana could guard herself from losing her powers with an oath on the Styx, not to get into that mindset unless it's Thomas doing it to her. She could also secure herself against blackmail like Thomas did by making an oath, not to swear on the Styx except for certain circumstances.
Also, if I were Thomas, I'd totally make Diana take an oath not to cum without my permission. That would driver her crazy and I wonder how long she could hold out until she'd contact Thomas and start begging.
There is much to like about this story. You do a great job, both with the sex scenes and the characters. Diana seems pretty much spot on for me and I can't help but respect her attitude and moral strength, while Thomas is a very interesting character, dominant and controlling, but also kind and conflicted about what he does.
As far as I'm concerned, how the characters deal with their situation adds a lot to the story and I enjoy the chapters that focus on character interaction just as much as those that focus on kink.
I'd be quite interested in seeing how Diana deals with some painplay when bound by her bracelets. That would probably be a bit of a weird situation for her.
In any case, great job with the story, I hope you'll update it some time.
Is this ever going to be updated?
Amazing story. I don't really like the Wonder Woman character but I absolutely love your take on her. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Terrific story.
It's fucking brilliant. Well written too.
Please write more. Let me know if there's anything I can do to help.
This is one of the only fics I've consistently come back to. Hell, you're the reason I made an account for this website, so I could tell you how much I love it. Hope to see more in the future!
I was blown away with how good this was, and was taken completely by supprise.
My only criticism is that there isn't more, fantastic job.
Chapter 1 - 9: I'm enjoying this story a lot. Very erotic. And I like the way you've written Wonder Woman.
Hope to see more of this.
To be honest, I have never actually paid much attention to Wonder woman much and have never really seen much interest in her erotic wise, mind you I know of her creator as well as her history of bondage.. but after this I have to say I think I got a very hard crush after reading this I really love this story a lot.
By the way... I know this is a bit out of place but I noticed you had a patreon while I wish I could throw you money I'm kinda in a financial bind... though might I suggest maybe getting posting your stories in http://www.hentai-foundry.com/site/index and https://archiveofourown.org/ these two sites may get you more traction if your trying to get more patrons judging by the amount of authors there plus it never hurts to spread your stories.
Chapter 9 was excellent
Great story. Last time I came here it only went up to Chapter 6.
The sex is both arousing and disturbing -- great.
Keep up the good work
-V
Great job on chap9. Hope to read more soon.
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