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Reviews for Oathbound

By : rubicon541
  • From blacky on October 26, 2010
    No lie, you've got the foreplay down pat. But other than that..Great boner inducing fic you got here.
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  • From toastbread on October 22, 2010
    Are you letting this story die? :(
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  • From toastbread on September 23, 2010
    Update! :-D
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  • From johnordan on September 12, 2010
    Very interesting what you have here.
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  • From ninesenshi on September 11, 2010
    Thanks for the fast chapter and the sex. Hope to see more soon.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From Marius138 on September 10, 2010
    So Andyman referred me over to your story and I have to say I was pleasantly surprised. It's been a long time since any other authors in the comics section has written anything that's interested me as much as this has. This is an excellent story and is very well thought out.

    I especially like it in the regard that there are aspects that hearkens back to the original Wonder Woman of the 1940's. The reference to her belt being removed to weaken her powers being an obvious one, and also the fact that back then her comics were filled with TONS of bondage motifs. Like the fact that when men bound her bracers together she lost all her powers and there were even instances where her bracers were referred to as Bracelets of Submission. I'm pretty sure there wasn't a single issue back then where she wasn't tied up in some fashion. So you get HUGE props for being able to capture that feel.

    I also like your style of writing. It's very clear and easy to read with excellent pacing. However, I do have to agree with AgentG on one thing and that is you could slow down the sex scenes and add more detail. Sometimes when I'm writing I try and imagine I'm describing the feelings and sensations to someone that's never experienced sex before.

    I do understand that in bondage the point of arousal isn't necessarily so much the sex but the act of submission or getting your partner to submit (depending on if your the Top or the bottom), and I have a feeling that this is where your coming from, but never the less a touch more detail here and there would definitely satisfy what the more vanilla readers are into. Other than that one small complaint I think you've written a flawless story and I'm excited to see where you take it.
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  • From darthme1011 on September 10, 2010
    Very hot storyyyyyy
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  • From AgentGv01 on September 10, 2010
    Chapter 3 review

    Well this was again nice and good for the non sex parts but the sex parts do need a lot more work. It was pretty unbelievable that she would have so many orgasms like that especially for a first time when they haven't even gotten to know each others' bodies that well. Also you should try and make them better, more descriptions, what they are feeling etc because it reads like he was only screwing her for a minute and then came. It's really hard for a women to cum in just that short a time let alone with that even if she was worked up. I don't know what your sexual experience is but in mine that's unrealistic.

    Besides the need for better actual sex parts, the story is really well done and you got the foreplay parts down at least. And it does look like she's starting to totally submit herself to this more and more. It was kind of a surprise she was on birth control given she hadn't been in a relationship to need it.

    One odd thing, it's kind of ironic her submissive side given Amazone history in the DC universe. Mainly that when Hercules came he stole an item from them but the sailors he hired, in the night captured them and took them all as slaves (even sex slaves) hence why no man is to set foot on the island after they were freed. Of course Diana came long after this point but it would be a hidden shame for her to actually like being dominated.

    I do wonder how this will evolve over time and what their outings will be like. Also wonder if they'll explore more riske sex while outside among others.
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  • From DomRevan on September 09, 2010
    Wow, just wow, which version of WW are we using? And if I start I story could I use some ideas from this?
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  • From on September 09, 2010
    Awesome! That was a lot of thought and a perfectly executed plan! And beyond that the writing was great. I would never have thought of anything like that.
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  • From toastbread on September 09, 2010
    I don't normally read first-person stories but I decide to take a chance with this one and I'm glad I did, it's SOLID! :-D The first chapter was actually a very good, fair portrayal of Diana under the lasso. I've read so many stories of that and everyone just turns her into a cheap whore the second it's on. It's nice that you retained her dignity and hint of danger. It probably sounds odd considering this is a site for smut but I do sort of wish that he hadn't rushed into sex on their second date, I'd love to have seen him build up for a while to the final event. Still great though, hope you continue it.
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  • From ninesenshi on September 09, 2010
    Awesome. Best WW fic ever. You came up with a very original concept to dominate her and have executed the relationship beautifully. Great characterization of WW. My only complaint is the lack of detail and length on the sex scene; I am sure you will get more into detail in future chaps. I hope to read more soon as this is so good.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From Andyman on September 08, 2010
    Truly awesome stuff. Definitely one of the best stories on the site. I can't wait for more.
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  • From on September 08, 2010
    I like this story. It has potential to be the best Wonder Woman fic on the site. kepp it up!!!
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  • From johnordan on September 08, 2010
    I love this story its so good!!
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