Reviews for OathboundBy : rubicon541 |
Another fantastic chapter, keep it up!
Absolutely incredible. Please keep writing this as not only is the erotica incredible, but you've made a wonderful plot that I can't wait to know more about!
This story is absolutely fucking incredible. One of the best. The way you manage to portray submission in Diana is wonderful and believable and so incredibly hot. The dynamic between her and Thomas (who's great as far as protagonists go) is great too. You manage to slowly bring Diana to ultimate submission while not stripping away what makes her Wonder Woman. I find myself looking forward to heartfelt dialogue between Diana and Thomas as much as I look forward to the smutty bits, which is something that's really rare in erotic fiction of this caliber.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you and good luck, Rubicon_Cross.
I first discovered this story a couple of years ago. And I just admit. It made me a tad uncomfortable, and I was not at all sure I wanted to like it it, but damn was it well written. Just saw that, out of the blue, there were three new chapters! And they made me uncomfortable, and I am not at all certain I want to like them but...... You can write, and exceptionally well. Mixed feelings and discomfort aside, I am terribly curious to see whrere you take this, cause damn can you write. Kudos.
Chap 8, very sexy. I liked the way you described the lighting etc at the beginning, well done. Looking forward to more.
An update: GLORIOUS!
Thank you for your excellent work.
New chapters, yay! Im very glad you got back to this story and hope to read more soon.
Continue if possible plz.The slow but rising tension is much more fun as its closer to original character's behaviour.
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