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Reviews for The Wide World Of Marvel

By : MarvelFan98
  • From ANON - gnome_man on March 08, 2014
    Hi There,

    I didn't read the whole thing, just bits here and there. It moved, people fucked, sucked and cum. On the other hand, you need to proofread your stuff. LOTS of misspellings, bad punctuation and grammar. Sentences that ran on forever. With polishing, you'd have a fairly decent story here. I'm afraid you won't win any awards, but just a little proofreading would make it sooooo much better. I know it's hard, but I think that you could be pretty good at this. Try to do some short pieces. Get a good beta person. You don't have to go back to school, but it could help. I think that a lot of it was simple typos, hitting an "s" when you wanted to hit an "a." I know that it is tedious and boring, and hard work. But you seem to have a certain flair to your style, and that is why I stayed with it. Keep at it. gnomey
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  • From maadmikemunch on March 06, 2012
    really love your work, keep it up. By the way as a side not could you do something with Hercules or Thor in it they are my two favorite marvel characters.
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  • From Ronin on October 02, 2011
    I'd like to see the Hulk and Red Hulk double-team someone. Maybe Ms. Marvel, maybe Thundra.
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  • From cdog21 on September 25, 2011
    This is a hot story with some exciting pairings, but what's up with no Spider-Man
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2011
    Great story! I would like to see Rogue again. Maybe she get fucked by Daken
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  • From ANON - anonymous on July 30, 2011
    You should do a couple spider-man stories, other then that great job
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  • From Royboy on June 01, 2011
    Glad to see a new chapter! Wonderful work!
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  • From Royboy on February 21, 2011
    Looking forward to new chapters. You just had Monica in some girl/girl stuff, but how about a big Nextwave orgy?
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  • From Royboy on November 23, 2010
    Great new set of chapters. How about Arana (or Spider-Girl as she's now being called) getting DP'd by Spidey and Human Torch?
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  • From on September 24, 2010
    WOW!

    I meant really wow!!
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  • From Royboy on August 20, 2010
    Great bunch of recent chapters, looking forward to more. How about some Runaways group action? Or Voyeur finding a way to watch Phyla-Vell and Moondragon?
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  • From ANON - decdragon on July 29, 2010
    thank you for doing Pietro and Wanda.
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  • From ANON - Anrew on July 08, 2010
    Next chapter should have Spider-man and Spider-woman, and maybe Black Cat if you could fit here in there somehow, doing it.
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  • From ANON - decdragon on April 05, 2010
    I really hope you have Scarlet Witch and Quicksilver in later. but not together. I kept waiting for them to show up in the X-Men thing but you never had them show up.
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  • From Evilerk73 on March 28, 2010
    sweet I was hoping for more Sue..now if only you can work Rogue in there again:D...Keep it up this story is amazing
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