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Reviews for Beach Week

By : seyunolu
  • From ANON - An enjoyable romp on October 21, 2016

    While the actual EGS comic has taken the relationships of some of the characters to a different place than they were when Beach Week started, this story has solid characterization and great interactions that fit the characters involved.

     

    my only complaint is how long it was between chapters 7 and 8, and how long it has been since 8 came out. I need more Beach Week!


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  • From seyunolu on February 29, 2016
    Cho Cozi Seyunolu here again. I fixed it on this site - it now lives both here and at archiveofourown, in case it gets screwed up again.
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  • From seyunolu on February 29, 2016
    Cho Cozi Seyunolu here. I've posted this over to archiveofourown seeing as this site seems to have eaten it. http://archiveofourown.org/works/6131851
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2013
    Uhm, was chapter 7 modified or something? I could have sworn there was a passage where Elliot and Sarah's eyes met above Grace's body, and I can't find it now...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2013
    I wonder if this could be the start of a running gag in which Elliot is "woken up" by a differznt person each day...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2013
    Changes in the comic are not that much of a problem. A lot of Harry Potter fanfics have been "invalidated" by later tomes, and they just kept going with a notice that they started prior to that tome...
    I'm very interested in this fic and hope it lives on.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2013
    It look like the latest updates may have put a damper on things, what with Sarah wanting to be just friends.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2013
    This fic is delicious! I can't get enough of it.
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  • From ANON - JF on October 18, 2012
    Good to see you back.
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  • From ANON - Epicurus on October 16, 2012
    Great to have you back Cho! This new chapter was such a tease, but hopefully a sign of greater things to come. I can't wait to see what you come up with next and I do hope we won't have to wait another year and half to find out.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2012
    Haha, that was cold. Though he did bring it on himself a little.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2012
    Thinking back of it, even getting them to third base would take some nudging, but I think giving them a lesbian show beforehand would easily enough guilt them into accepting. Then they'd make use of the transformation gun for the last part.

    Also, maybe a reversed scene (mSarah + fElliot) could have potential ?
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  • From ANON - James on September 25, 2011
    Well, so much for the multiple summer updates. It's a real shame too, as this really is one of the best erotic fan fics out there. I sincerely hope for more updates sometime in the future. I really want to see a Elliott/Female Tedd scene.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2011
    The girls are teasing, but I think a M/M scene would be quite difficult to write (though not impossible)
    * The Tedd x Justin pairing is nonexistent.
    * The Elliot x Justin pairing has the problem that "casual" sex with an unrequited love can make things worse sentimentally... though it might also solve problems rather than exacerbate them, depending on how it's written.
    * The Elliot x Tedd pairing is possible, but if given the option I think both would prefer that Tedd be switched female first. They could probably do it M/M for the girls, but they'd have to ask REALLY nicely for them to go past third base.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2011
    Uhm... Wow. This chapter went above and beyond any expectation I had!
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