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Reviews for Spider-Man Dark Urges

By : AgentGv01
  • From marvelmaster616 on February 19, 2011
    Well this was the first chapter in recent memory that didn't have any actual sex, but it sure had some great phone sex! I love how you had MJ and Peter talking so dirty. It's a creative way for MJ to entice him and it almost worked too. Now it's getting serious. The Kingpin has made his move and he's basically sent Peter across a line he'll never return from. The symboite already has him in a morally gray area. So I can see him being a lot more harsh when he confronts the Kingpin. I look forward to seeing how you do it! This series is dark, but in a good way. You've made it dark without being too angsty. You also threw in a decent story. For that, I deem this story awesome! Keep up the great work buddy! This remains one of the best Spider-Man stories on adultfanfiction.
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  • From KaelHyun on February 19, 2011
    I could see an easy Retcon for Aunt May not being dead: Sheild had a feeling that Kingpin might make a move and quietly replaced her with a life like robot
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  • From VFSNAKE on February 18, 2011
    OH NO! Peter needs to unleash his rage on Kingpin!
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  • From GrimLegion on February 15, 2011
    long time no read. great new chapters. oh did you know your disclamer now reads "i do now own spiderman"
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  • From marvelmaster616 on November 02, 2010
    I hope my review goes through this time! This was another great chapter. I see you're finally setting things up for some action that is more than just sexual. lol As much as I've enjoyed all the hot scenes you've put together, I'm looking forward to seeing how you move things along. It seems the suit is continuing to make Peter more amoral. He's now perfectly okay with taking money rather than leaving it to the cops, which is probably what he would have done before the suit. He's also perfectly okay with celebrating in a very graphic way. lol It's nice to see him and Black Cat really go at it. I don't think they had much one-on-one to this point. It was really done nicely and it shows how far Peter has come since the suit took over. I can't help but wonder if it'll push him to things like murder once the Kingpin starts messing up his life. He'll certainly be more inclined to cross those lines this time. I look forward to seeing how you handle it and how you put together more erotic scene! Keep up the excellent work, my friend! This is by far one of the best stories of it's kind! Take care and best wishes!
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  • From Ratdogtwo on October 27, 2010
    glad to see another chapter. awsome chapter keep up the great work
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  • From VFSNAKE on October 24, 2010
    YAY! Good chapter. Spidey's girls are about to be attaked. KILL THE KINGPIN!
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  • From Ratdogtwo on August 15, 2010
    another awsome chapter
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  • From Ice13 on August 13, 2010
    Great update as always!!!! Natasa's so hot...
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  • From alienyouthct on August 11, 2010
    To be honest, I was a little curious when I saw this back at the top of the latest page and so I decided to see what was new in storyville. And honestly... not much. I mean, it's essentially the same as Gwen, MJ, the Silver Sable, and Felicia. I mean, I can understand an over-arcing theme and all... but at this point it's getting to the point where the chapters are "This girl shows up and then here's some exposition and then there's oral sex where he makes her hornier with chemicals and then vaginal sex where he makes her even hornier with more chemicals and then the deviancy of the week and she's hooked on Peter and willing to totally break established character for him". Variety is the spice of life, hombre. I mean, for a superhero fic you've done perilously little actual superhero-related content (which seems to be standard across your body of works), Gwen seemingly developed sudden nymphomania and a wandering eye but that disappeared almost as fast as it appeared with no real reason for either its appearance or removal, Peter could always meet and flirt with a girl... even lure her in for sexual encounters without resorting to drugging her repeatedly to get what he wants.

    And hey, it's concrit. So you can delete it if you can't handle it, but at least I can't get in trouble for it.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on August 11, 2010
    Great update man! Always worth the wait and this one felt a bit more refined than previous chapters. I like how you used Black Widow. In Ultimate she always did seem to have 'dangerous' tastes to say the least. lol She's also not afraid to use sex to get what she wants. She can be selfish and Peter definitely made good use of that side of her. But I think that trick with his suit really sealed the deal! lol Strange that Black Widow would have a big dick fetish like that, especially one that is driven by the symbiote. Then again it makes about as much sense as Kitty's tentacle fetish. lol You've given plenty of the characters their own unique tastes and now Peter has the equivalent of a female army on his side. All I can say is what a lucky guy. lol So the Kingping comes into the picture next? Guess that means this fic could be going down the home stretch. If that's the case this will definitely rank as one of your best. Please keep up the excellent work my friend! Definitely looking forward to the next part. Peace!
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  • From VFSNAKE on August 11, 2010
    Yeah! Peter's got another one. Now to keep Fury off his back and get more pussy out of the deal.
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  • From ANON - decdragon on July 31, 2010
    first I must say I don't like Spider-Man, he is my one of my least favorite Marvels. that being said I love this story. I decided to give it a try because of you x-men story. A thought I had though for some future girl or women as it were would be Ms. Marvel, and Sue Storm.
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  • From ANON - Gundamus on July 12, 2010
    More please
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi-Titan on June 21, 2010
    Well this has to be the bes god damn ultimate spider-man harem fics ever. Many the only. I hope it gets a well deserved update soon
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