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Reviews for Spider-Man Dark Urges

By : AgentGv01
  • From pitbull4567 on February 26, 2017

    Great story


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  • From pitbull4567 on February 25, 2017

    Interesting story 


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  • From ANON - NJK on February 20, 2016
    Any chance that Dark Urges is gonna get re-uploaded?
    Damn good story, seems a waste that you can't read it anymore.
    Love your works either way, good luck in the future.
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  • From ANON - Akuma-Heika on September 10, 2013
    Slowly Peter could see their stomachs slowly bulging as the suit pieces in them were growing, feeding off of them like a pregnant woman’s child.
    With how much material they have to extract from the girls I am surprised they are surviving it. The huge blood loss is not helping them. and combined with the sudden and massive nutrient loss, which would have had to include breaking down their own bodies to support (if a pregnant woman is missing vitamins, minerals, or other components; their bodies will literally break down bone and tissue and harvest the components for the baby), the loss would kill them.

    Overall I would prefer it sticking to a male protagonist instead of the male deutagonists, but it is your story. Hope Peter remains the boss though.
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  • From ANON - Ramjet94 on September 03, 2012
    You know what you need to do? You need to find someone online and commision them to make a Spider Man Dark Urges Comic. There are plenty of porn comic online why not have one thats well written and drawn? Because this story is just amazing.
    I would read it and every single person who read this would probably read it.
    Reply back what you think.
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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 27, 2012
    Awsome chapter and Amazing story thinks for shareing it with us.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on July 27, 2012
    Well, my friend, I know I've said this many times before, but I'll say it again. You've built something truly amazing here. It feels so long ago that you started this story and I really had no idea how far you were going to take it and how you would have it end. Well after reading the final chapter, all I can say it was as satisfying as Peter, Gwen, and MJ seemed to be after their final romp. lol Like all your epilogues, you did a good job of tying up the loose ends. You handled the little things like the three of them being in school, getting themselves a legal guardian, and setting themselves up with money. It helps create a new life that isn't dark, but it isn't very heroic either. The symbiote clearly changed them and that change has really come full circle in many ways. Now they're okay with blackmail, bribing, and in times flat out drugging someone like what Eddie did with Carol Danvers and Black Widow. It's a line they're okay with crossing as symobites and I think you've made it believable even if it is dark.

    I was also intrigued to see what they did with Felicia and Kitty. We got another one of those bizarre birth scenes with the symbiotes. It's a very odd way to reproduce, but it definitely makes for some interesting girl-on-girl action to say the least. lol It adds to their ever growing family of sorts and they still had enough energy afterwards for a three way. In many ways, I think that helps encapsulate the theme of this story. Even though it evolved over many years, it definitely came together in the end and you should be very proud. I can't think of too many other stories on this site that have reached the length and depth of quality that you have reached with this. For that, I bow before this story's greatness. Great job, my friend! I know you have so many other ideas, but you've definitely raised the bar with Dark Urges. Until next time, take care and best wishes, my friend.

    Regards,
    MarvelMaster616
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  • From cdog21 on July 08, 2012
    This was a really good story. A shame that it has come to an end, but at least we get to have an epilouge.

    I hope the other stories you have planned will star Spider-Man as well.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on July 07, 2012
    This chapter felt like an appropriate culmination of a very dark story. You've taken all these characters down so many dark paths. Now they seem to have reached a tipping point. Peter killed the Kingpin, something that really sets him apart from who he once was. I actually thought you were going to get a bit more extreme with the guy that tried to rape Mary Jane, but given the power she has now I can't see why she would let that happen. After the torture she endured, I think she's well within her right to fight back. Now that the Kingpin is out of the picture, Peter and his team of sorts have plenty of new choices they could make. I look forward to seeing how you tie up the remaining loose ends. This has been a truly amazing story and I applaud you for sticking with it even as the Ultimate comics have completely gone to hell. Your work here is something to be proud of and I think you should take a lot of pride in the final from this story takes, whatever it may be. Again, great job my friend! Keep up the excellent work on this and all your future endeavors. Until next time, take care and best wishes.

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 06, 2012
    anothergreat chapter keep up the great work.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on June 08, 2012
    I'm sorry for the late review. I haven't been on this site lately and I'm disappointed in that because this was a great chapter. For once, you didn't try to get too kinky or too novel with the sex. It was just Peter and Mary Jane, making love in as normal a way as two people could. It's a nice touch, balancing out some of the other darker elements throughout this story. You've always been pretty good at those scenes and I'm glad you took some time from the symbiote twisting, gang-banging themes for something a bit more basic. But now that Mary Jane has allowed herself to be captured, it's bound to get darker. It's a pretty twisted plan, but with the symbiotes on their side it could definitely get ugly! I look forward to seeing how they all take down the Kingpin once and for all. Keep up the excellent work, my friend! I know it's not saying much given how much the comic suck these days, but this is the best Ultimate story out there in the moment. lol Until next time, take care and best wishes.

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Ratdogtwo on June 05, 2012
    another awsome chapter. keep up the great work.
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  • From SexyLizard on May 30, 2012
    Damn, another Cliffhanger.
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  • From Electricboa on May 12, 2012
    This is a very interesting story, I always liked the symbiote concept and you're taking it to a fun place. It's one of my favorite stories on here and I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I'm really looking forward to Black Cat getting her own suit.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on March 22, 2012
    Interesting setup, freeing Frank Castle so they can sic him on the Kingpin. I like it! It definitely has the potential to get volatile very quickly. If nothing else, he'll frustrated the Kingpin to a point where he'll start making mistakes. That usually works against him like it did in the comics when he killed that guy on camera. So I definitely look forward to what you do with that. But the scene with Gwen and MJ was definitely the highlight! I'm glad you finally had them talk about the somewhat brutal circumstances that led to this point. It was pretty nasty and I'm surprised you didn't address it sooner. But I think that after everything they've been through, they have the necessary perspective if that's the right word. Plus, they sure know how to cheer each other up. lol Sable certainly knows how to talk dirty as well. It's an interesting contrast, her being so submissive when she's so tough on the outside. It makes for such colorful dialog. lol As always, it was a very entertaining chapter. I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more! Until next time, take care and best wishes my friend!
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