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Reviews for Down Fall

By : teferill3
  • From blacky on January 21, 2009
    I never was a fan of MaryJane, but, you think you could explain why she's a filthy cum bucket? That was weird.

    Not to mention the back story with Francis was painfully weak. If someone is getting charged for murder, said person, is not walking around scott free. Not to mention if the prosecuter's family is discovered brutally masacred. Some forethought into your story would be nice.

    And what's with Peter's physic? He's small? Since you're starting with the marriage I'm assuming this is the Spidey from the comics, who is certainly not small or 'lithe'.

    All in all, interesting story. Spidey's life already sucks, and you want to make it worse, so oddly enough I'm looking forward to more.
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