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Reviews for The Cake Games

By : kokoronoitami
  • From metalheadneko on August 18, 2008
    gotcha! ok. and wow this last chapter..... haahhhh. lol it was really well done. sneaky joker *shakes finger at him* go batman for punishments. no cake lol. sorry if i sound a little scrambled...i havent slept for ...62 hours...now
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 17, 2008
    Um...hot.

    Joker + Batman = Deliciousness.
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  • From ButterflySoup on August 17, 2008
    You do realize that every time I look at cake now, I'm going to think of this, right?
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  • From kokoronoitami on August 17, 2008
    KBLOOD & METALHEAD- Yeah... I agree with ya. I didn't think Batman would stand idly either.... but I wanted to finish the next chapter before posting what followed which might have offered further insight. Ha ha ha! Thanks for reviewing so far... ^_^ I appreciate it.
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  • From metalheadneko on August 15, 2008
    i has returned and i am pleased!!!! i still love your story very much. im no good a critque, but the character reactions to each other are very good. however! i agree with the other person that i dont think batman would sit back and watch idly after the joker shot some one. other than that, your story is pure perfection in my opinion. i cant wait for your next update.

    ps: didja know that there is NO fanart for this pairing. i mean finding fics is hard enough T_T
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  • From ButterflySoup on August 13, 2008
    God, you're so amazing! I just love your writing! However, I'm too lazy to tell you anything else right now.
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  • From thegeppe on August 13, 2008
    you have us hanging with every chapter : D
    I think Batman's real plan is to send Joker into a diabetic coma lol cake over dose X)
    Fantastic chapter!
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  • From K.Blood on August 13, 2008
    Please don't get me wrong. Now I like this story and do want you to continue it, but I find it hard to believe that Batman would just let the Joker shoot a guy, thus killing him, and not do anything about it. That's the only thing that bugs me, besides that it's an okay fic.
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  • From metalheadneko on August 08, 2008
    i love this story!!! please keep it going!!
    BTW is your story based on the comics or the Dark Knight movie? im not 100% sure which
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  • From thegeppe on August 06, 2008
    Amazing! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ButterflySoup on August 05, 2008
    Oh, tell me more! They both seem to be in character, and it is written most thoughtfully with just enough description to match the dialog, witch I just adore. Also, it would seem that you are capable of setting up a plot that takes place, from what I can see, in just a few rooms. Good for you!
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  • From Cozy on August 03, 2008
    Ooh, this is definitely shaping up to be fun! I like your characterization of the Joker, and Batman's squeamishness to touch him just seems so right as well! You especially made me squeal when the Joker called Bruce on his dislike of seeing him use the dishes >:3

    In the second chapter, though, be careful about using "you" statements ("Like when you have a new toy" paragraph), because it can pull the reader out of the moment (I know it did for me, though only briefly!). Also, in terms of "show, don't tell", you could drop in some cool flashbacks from Arkham with the psychs testing the Joker instead of telling us, "They told him that he was more agreeable after eating sweets." (I mean, really, who doesn't love some extra Joker-time?!)

    Of course, I'm just being picky here :) Sorry if you weren't looking for critique, it's just the beta-er in me rattling the cage! In any case, good piece, and great character work. I look forward to more!
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