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Reviews for Ultimate Tangled Web

By : superbang
  • From blacky on October 15, 2010
    HAH! I remember when those two friggin hugged and she commented that it was the most awkward hug evar!
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  • From blacky on October 15, 2010

    Oh wow. I just pleaded that Norman wouldn't touch MJ, but after reading this *which was awkwardly funny as hell* I get the feeling age difference doesn't mean much here.

    Haha!
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  • From blacky on October 15, 2010
    Damn it, superbang! Why the hell do you always write shit I end up reading all night? Damn you, sir! Damn you!

    In all seriousness, niiiice. Though I'm hoping Norman really doesn't ..have his way with a teen. Thats ..rather..um..iono..pedo-ish?
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  • From Ice13 on May 06, 2008
    As usual, great stuff. This update was amazing, and Ultimate Gwen's return? Inspired!
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  • From anacsadder on May 02, 2008
    Aw, did you run out of steam? I guess that's the problem with WIP stories...
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  • From LDora on April 06, 2008
    I really like a lot of the characterisation you've got going on here. In particular, a lot of the little Peter quips are so . . . well . . . Peter! The narrative is occasionally a little hard to follow from chapter or chapter when the time frame jumps or the perspective changes, but this is shaping up to be a really interesting story. Yay for bringing back the clone! I always thought that was a bit of a cop out in the original canon. "Hey, here's a neat character, he's kinda crazy, could be interest-OH NOES BLARG I AM DEAD." I'll be curious to see where you go from here.
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  • From anacsadder on March 24, 2008
    Well, I'm a tiny bit disappointed that it's all in her head because that's not where I saw it going from the end of chapter 7 (and I admit, I'm in denial that the next Ult Spider-Man volume is called Death of the Goblin).
    But, as long as you keep writing the sex scenes as well as you've been writing them, I'll keep reading.
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  • From superbang on March 17, 2008
    Hey everybody,

    I never really put out a statement saying what this story was about. It's about me trying to get at least one chapter done per week. That's it. Not to mention I find the Ultimate Universe much easier to deal with than 616.

    I'm trying to adress some of the continuity issues. I'm finally up to date on my Ult. Spidey canon, so bear with me for a little bit. It'll make sense in the end. I'm going to one up Marvel by moving forward instead of retconning stuff out of existence.

    With that being said, I don't want to sarcafice workmanship for speed. So if things end up a day or so late please bear with me. I'll try to have a new chapter up every Monday.

    Thanks for reading.
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  • From anacsadder on March 03, 2008
    Finally, I no longer have to write all my own goblin stuff.
    Whether you intended to go this way all along, or were listening to my semi-request, I thank you for this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 29, 2008
    Honestly? The original Tangled Web/Tangled Web 2 wasn't good enough to justify a reimagining of it, especially since you haven't even finished the first go around. Honestly, if you want an excuse to have Mary Jane turn into a slut who chases anything while Peter and Felicia dance around their unresolved sexual tension, just do a PWP rather than trying something so flimsy and contrived that it makes the average porno movie's script look like award-winning literature.
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  • From anacsadder on February 25, 2008
    Aw, way to leave us on a cliff hanger =(
    But the updates have been coming pretty quickly, so I guess I won't have to wait long, right? *insert hopeful smile here*
    Is the next chapter going to involve the goblin?
    I have a couple OCxGoblin things on my computer, but I never posted them because they're stuck in the middle of much longer fics...
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  • From anacsadder on February 18, 2008
    *claps for chapter five*
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  • From ANON - marvelfan on February 14, 2008
    Amazing work. You wrote VERY hot Spidey and Black Cat scene. Keep up the good work.
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  • From anacsadder on February 10, 2008
    You write so well.
    The thing about following a shiny, shapely ass (or however that bit went) made me laugh. You always seem to have a good handle on Peter's character.
    I'd be lying if I didn't admit I was a little disappointed with where things cut off with Osborn, but fangirls will be fangirls =p
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  • From ANON - marvelfan on January 28, 2008
    Great work. Story really got me interested. I´d like to see some Spiderman and Black Cat action. I´m waiting to see what other things you got in your mind that you add in the story.
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