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Reviews for Hamato Karai

By : MercyJinn
  • From brainfear on April 14, 2008
    Oh man. This is so well done. Holy....Please more before I die....
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  • From Mister E on February 22, 2008
    To take what you once said to me but now reverse and twist it. There just isn't enough Leo/Karai smut in this world. So more SMUT! MORE SMUT! :-P

    And love.. yeah. That too.
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  • From ANON - Reijiro on February 09, 2008
    Awwwwwww. That was so sweet! I can't wait to see how Karai reacts, or to see just what Leo came up with to write. :3
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  • From ANON - Reijiro on January 22, 2008
    What can I say... I LOVE this story! Somehow even more now it is set in Japan. Can't wait to see how their training session pans out. ;D
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  • From Reijiro on January 17, 2008
    I have been very remiss in not reading and reviewing this story for so long. I can't tell you how happy I was to find you had continued with it! I love Leo and Karai, and I have to say this is one of my favourite stories regarding them. The way you keep them so true to their characters, maintaining the friction between them despite their marriage, is simply wonderful.

    And I had to giggle at the end of Chapter 3 over Mike losing his bet! XD

    Good luck with your move, and with continuing with this story. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of it (set in Japan? YAY!!), and am hoping to keep up with reading a bit more online this year.

    Cheers!

    Rei.

    PS: The Adult Fan Fiction Awards are happening again this year, and I'd love to nominate the chapters of this you've posted in 2007. Can I still reach you on the email address you had last year? And if you'd like to check out the competition it is being run at the Stealthy Stories forum (SS), and at the LiveJournal (LJ) community TMNT_Adult http://community.livejournal.com/tmnt_adult/. You only need to be over the age of 18 to join the LJ community, so not as difficult as getting into the adult section of SS. Or I'm happy to email you all the competition details as they come to light again. The competition officially starts next week, with a two week window for people to submit nominations. So I will send you a formal request to include this story in the competition shortly.
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  • From Lizy on June 26, 2007
    Nice ^.^ I always liked this couple.
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  • From Kismet on May 25, 2007
    Oh my...so very hot. Leo certainly does not get enough attention in the bedroom. Or kitchen. ^_~

    It just seems to fit him, having such a fantasy. I'm glad they were both so thouroughly pleasured. I can't wait until they get to Japan! You'd better be using these next couple of months in motion, brainstorming. Hehehe. Please?
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  • From ANON - Andrew Williams on April 25, 2007
    Man, I love this story. I check every other day for updates. Every since it was published here. Please continue this story. And if you can, please update more often.
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  • From Kismet on April 24, 2007
    Oh, wow. I dared not hope to hear more from this wonderful tale. Now you've got it all set up for the next chapter...I hope it's soon!

    I'm certainly glad that Karai got the heebie-jeebies from his touch. I can't wait to see how things work out..and if they kiss and make up. Or at least kiss. ^^
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  • From ANON - Swallow on April 23, 2007
    Oh, Jinn, you better not take too long with chapter 5. I'm squirming in anticipation over here!
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  • From ANON - Astronemalover on April 23, 2007
    Great, when ch 5 come?
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  • From jschuck on January 23, 2007
    Lovely lovely job on all the chapters so far. What a beautiful take on the frustratingly complex Leo/Karai relationship. Fantas.
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  • From Kismet on January 21, 2007
    Aww. So very sweet. I love this story, and was so looking foward to more character develoment. Great writing!
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  • From EvaBrick on January 15, 2007
    Wow! What a great story! I've never liked a Karai fic before. :) You did a great job with Leo's character.
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  • From ANON - Reijiro on January 11, 2007
    G'day Jinn-Jinn,

    I have some good news for you! This story has been nominated in the 2006 Adult Fan Fiction Awards! I am one of the organizers of this competition this year and it's my job to contact all the authors nominated to ask their permission prior to officially entering their works into the event. I normally do this via email or PM, but haven't had any luck uncovering an alternate way to contact you. If you would like to participate I need to be able to send you a 'nomination authorization' message, so please contact me via the email address given above (shinkiro57 at hotmail dot com), or via PM or email on the Stealthy Stories Forums which is co-hosting this event with Mikey's Forums (in the 'Adults Only' section of each). I need to have received permission from you on or before the 16th of January 2007 for you works to be entered in the competition. CONGRATULATIONS on being nominated, I do hope very much to hear from you soon!

    And I should really review while I'm here, huh?

    I really enjoyed this story, I am a BIG sucker for Leo/Karai and I liked the way she took so long to admit her acceptance of him. The problems and pitfalls of their relationship are what make it so interesting to me.

    The only thing I could pick with it is the tense of the words you were using often 'skipped' to present tense, despite the majority of the text being in past tense. I noticed this more in the second chapter, and while it doesn't really detract from the meaning I derived from the story it did make me have to re-read a couple of sentences here and there. Not that I minded too much! Think I'll be re-reading this fic a few times for myself anyway! Thank you for a great read!

    Cheers!

    Reijiro.
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