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Reviews for Missing panels from Ultimate Spider-Man #59

By : superbang
  • From fluxl10 on February 19, 2016
    May i ask, why whenever i try to read this, i never get the full story, i only get the disclaimer bit, and then it stops. i cannot read the story
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  • From blacky on October 18, 2010
    End. Reading just PWP, which is what this could potentionally turn into, would be lame. But if you think you can keep it interesting, I'm all up for it.


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  • From DasDeke on December 26, 2009
    First off your amazing writer, and i look forward to seeing more from you. Keeping this going could prove interesting, but you've also left it a good stopping place. Might be interesting to see some Peter MJ action picking up or branching off of this in a different fic.

    I enjoyed very much your little side comments by Spidey(he always has a witty line), as well as the interactions with Gwen, and MJ. You really could feel the love with MJ and Peter, and that's pretty cool, because I really enjoy them as a couple (F you Joe Quesada)

    I think you've done a great job, and this wasn't just the classic fuck fic, you added more to it. Kudos!
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  • From Clue21 on January 24, 2009
    MORE MORE MORE!!!
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  • From blacky on November 20, 2007
    More would be cool. But can you seriously tone down Peter constantly feeling awkward because of Mary Jane less?

    It got annoying after the 2nd chapter.
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  • From anacsadder on November 13, 2007
    *gasp*
    I got distracted in the Resident Evil section and missed two updates? Not just one, but TWO?
    Well, I'm all caught up now, and I'm still digging the way you write. I love the sidethoughts from Peter, you've managed to capture his humor. And the pace of the scenes is great, I don't like rushed scenes.
    Despite my bias for super-villains, if you write more, I will read it. Though, I'm not sure where else there is to fill in considering Gwen's fate. I can't remember how long it was between this and the Carnage story, though, because I read those a long time ago. Anyway, like I said, if you find more to write, I will keep reading.
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  • From GrimLegion on November 11, 2007
    love the story.it couuld end here I guess. but I think you could keep it going. id like to read more. its a great story
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  • From Ratdogtwo on November 10, 2007
    I would love to see more
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  • From marvelmaster616 on September 08, 2007
    Damn! That was really something. I liked it. It was very sexy and entertaining. Not to mention downright funny at times! lol The whole bit with MJ turning Gwen gay was really something. I can understand her thought process, but I can't help but wonder if that's a genuine fear of Gwen. MJ sure doesn't seem to mind though. lol That part with her dwelling on Liz was hilarious! So now Gwen gets Peter to herself. I can't wait to see that! You really know how to draw these things out and I'm loving every minute of it. Any chance Kitty Pryde could work her way in at one point? just a thought. Keep up the great work! Slickboy out.
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  • From GrimLegion on September 06, 2007
    glad to see your back. was pleased to have the new chapter. I enjoyed the whole "if a girl makes you come your gay" did you make that up or is that a rule somewhere. it sounds like a "one time at band camp" kind of thing. anyway glad your back. and keep it up.
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  • From ANON - firegod on July 01, 2007
    damn supe this fic rulz i meen i love the ultimate spiey and the threesome fic idea was brillient i know i cant spell but still i am a fan fic writer and i was about to quit as my writing skills suk but reading this turned me back on to writing i love this fic and can not wait much longer for an update god!!!!!!!!!!
    ps:my girl loves fan-fics but hates adult stuff you got her turned on to it and she is horney as hell after reading them so i thank you from the bottem of my heart thank you!!!!
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  • From anacsadder on May 25, 2007
    aka Kinky Penguin
    Webbing bondage, you did listen to me!
    I like the way you did MJ. When Peter was thinking that thing about Doc Ock taking notes, I knew he was going to catch the wrongness in that thought. As a fangirl, though, I have to say that Doc Ock could nibble cake off my body any day *dopey grin*
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  • From ANON - seb on May 23, 2007
    Really good work, I have thouroughly(sp?) enjoyed reading this story and I am looking foward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Athanor007 on September 23, 2006
    I've never read the Ultimate imprints of any Marvel comic, but I really enjoyed this fic. Any chance of a sequel, or maybe just an epilogue? Not just for the smut, but I'm interested in the emotional fallout of this encounter, especially between Peter and Gwen. Would she have stopped him, or just told him the truth and gone ahead and done it? Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - minilopnews on June 28, 2006
    Man... That was excellently written, and very interesting... This one seems to be finished, but I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your works.
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