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Reviews for Writings of the Heart

By : meathead13
  • From ANON - Tres Jolie on November 12, 2005
    I LOVE this story! Please keep it up; you're doing a fantastic job!
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  • From ANON - Jinn-Jinn on November 08, 2005
    Hi, I read the review that you wrote about my story and reading your recent addition to your story I have to admit you're right. My story could fit in yours. How bizzare is that? I never even got to read the new chapter when I finished mine. Anyway, I do like how this is going. Keeps getting dirtier. Me likes.
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  • From ANON - jenna on November 06, 2005
    WOW! You're a very talented writer. This story is so good. Every chapter is better than the last so keep 'em coming! I can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on November 02, 2005
    Right!! Just some action already please!!
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  • From ANON - Werty on October 31, 2005
    lol This was a hilarious chapter! I loved the Raph/Leo interaction, with Raph getting stuck in the window and his later crack about Leo being sexually frustrated. Barry seemed kinda cool, and his and Carrie's conversation leads me to believe that her ex will play a role in later chapters. Looking forward to that, actually. And it was nice to see Raph softening up to Carrie, at least a little. I'm beginning to have suspicions that there is a love triangle in the making here. Which would be great fodder for drama and later sexual tension, I think.

    Nice work as always, and I hope to read more soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - jenna on October 30, 2005
    WOW! I gotta say I'm really impressed with this story. I love it! I really like Carrie too. Can't wait for chapter 5. Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on October 29, 2005
    Keep it up! But put in some "action" already please!
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  • From ANON - ffdemon on October 28, 2005
    Really good, you got my interest

    Hope we will learn what append to Donnie, Mike and sensei...

    more sone pleeeeeeease *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - hairymonkeymom13 on October 28, 2005
    so good i cant wait to read the next chapter but im not pushin lol much lol .
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  • From ANON - Werty on October 28, 2005
    I had a lousy day today and was in dire need of a pick-me-up, and lo and behold I find out that you updated this wonderful little fic! It's, like, cosmic or something. ^_~

    I was really digging the characterization in this chapter. Raphael was acting like a complete ass, although I can't really blame him, considering everything that's happened to them recently. Leo's personality was perfectly done, from his calmness in the face of Raph and Carries' temper, to his obvious concern for his family, and even to the way he stiffened under Carrie's spontaneous embrace. I'm also liking Carrie more and more as a character, because she seems very real to me. Endearing yet flawed, just like the rest of humanity.

    And so THAT'S how they arrived at Carrie's place! Poor guys... I fervently hope that the others are all right. @_@

    And never fear! Take as long as you need to develop the plot, for like I said earlier, it makes for a better story in the long run. When you get through with the story, however, you might want to consider also posting this one on FFnet. You'd have to cut out the more graphic sexual bits, but I think the people there would like it. Anyways... Hurry up with the next chapter, please! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - JFG on October 28, 2005
    Wow - I really don't know how, when, or who whom the sex will occur, and right now I don't even care! Your plot is excellent! I hope you don't leave us hanging too long about where Splinter, Mikey, and Don are....
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on October 26, 2005
    Interesting. Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Werty on October 25, 2005
    Wee! More 'Writings'! I hope your updates are always this prompt, for if that's the case then you will have made me a happy person indeed. ^_^

    This chapter was wonderful, as if seems we can expect from you. Leo and Carrie's conversation seemed very natural, awkward and vaguely hostile in all the right places, before warming up nicely as the two became more familiar with each other. I love that Raphael's temper and mistrust will be a thing to fear in this fic, and that Leo understands his brother well enough to insist that he accompany her. Although I do wonder why Leo didn't insist upon using Carrie's phone as soon as he awakened, just to make sure that the others were all right. Ah, well; I'm sure that all will be explained soon enough.

    Hm, I can't wait to see who Carrie's love interest will be. I lean towards Leonardo at the moment, simply because he is the more trusting and laid back of the two (and he's my favorite, so I can't help but hope), but this could just as easily be a Raph romance in the making. Or perhaps both of them, since I freely admit that I'm a sad, strange individual. ^_~

    Anyway... I read it, I loved it, I'm asking for more!
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  • From ANON - Werty on October 24, 2005
    Oh, very well done! I enjoyed reading this, and I am quite gratified that you're taking the time to develop a plot before getting down to the sexual bits. Those are fun, naturally, but can often be made better with a little time and effort. So thank you for writing what promises to be quite a fun read and please update soon! ^_^
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