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Reviews for Lady Doom: Sequel to Minion

By : Gevaisa

From ANON - Nat on January 21, 2006
hi tis nat this chapter cleared up some of my confusion on why there is this alternate group of human i think that they are human and that they represent people who are no longer in victor's life but now it is getting interesting that htye can track them and figure them out, victor is very well represented and i like the way that you had him come up with the scanner to make it known who is who in this story... anywho keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on January 18, 2006
hi again tis nat hope all is well on your end this was a somewhat puzzling chapter but it makes a point with jean and her being the phoenix and all that hope that this doubles things is put to rest cuz if i was victor i would let my double have it, get jo's ring back and live happily ever after but that is only in fairytales huh? i like. hope to see more chapter up from you soon! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on January 15, 2006
YEA MISSED PILLS SCENE! go Jo hope all turns out well inthe end for her... it must be great fun for them to watch the imposters do their duties and try to be the real them hope to see more chapter up from you soon im really enjoying this storyline you write very well! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on January 14, 2006
Hi again a great chapter really cleared things up for me, now i really understand the imposters and the realscharacters feelings good job with that by the way... to see the supposed valaria at the feet of her maid would be funny yea the weddings coming soon hope that Jo is preggers cuz that would make a splendid wedding gift for victor hope to see another chapter up from you soon until then keep up the great writing and cya in the next chapter! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on January 12, 2006
Yea SUMT! :-) loved the chappie and i can just see the bed breaking too funny keep up the great writing and hope to see wedding bells in the future? keep it up this is getting good!!!
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From ANON - Nat on January 10, 2006
Im SOOO sorry my comp has been down due to remodling in my house I did not mean to leave u I really liked this chapter the grey stuff is funny and the caligraphy is cool i learned to do that in high school but can't remember now really hope to see more of the real victor soon this new one is a bit of a dork ass in my opinion, but hey only the real victor can act as he does hope to see more from you soon! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on January 04, 2006
hi again loved this chappie but im a little confused with to whom these duplicates are? i hope jo is preggers victor would be a great dad hope that you had a great new year i know i did and laughed my ass off when my dad got drunk X) hope to see more chapter up form you soon are wedding bells in the future? TTFA Nat
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From ANON - Nat on December 29, 2005
hey i would not know if you were copying them or not i have never heard of them are they in paperback or are they an e-book? liked the chappie and the day the earth stood still reference that is by far my fav sci-fi movie of the old genre keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon PS hope your holidays went well for you and your family :-)
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From ANON - Nat on December 23, 2005
Okay thats fair loved the background story of victor really keeps me interested what are the books of doom? really liked this chappie and hope to see more up soon if now i know we are all on break so merry christmas and happy holidays to everyone :-)
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From ANON - Soulshard on December 21, 2005
(Slinks back wlth a very guilty expression on her face, and cowers from Impending Wrath Of Gevaisa)
Please don't think too badly of me i've been really ill. Ok on with the belated reviews that i owe you, i think that i was up to chapter 9 so thats where i will pick up, the fact that Malice is still on the loose could come back to haunt Joviana hopefully we have not seen the last of her.

Thankyou for using Triumph & Torment absolutely one of the best Doom stories ever (except this one of course) it shows a whole new side to Victor that hadn't been seen before. I still can't wait to hear what she really said to him and the idear about the engraved wedding band is a loverly sentiment and very romantic. As you probably guessed i would love Victor to be a father, although i seem to remember that he was not a very good foster father to kristoff but mabe he would be more caring towards hs own flesh and blood. Interesting cameo of Doctor Strange (now if you could find a way to bring the Silver Surfer into the story i will build you a shrine and sacrifice a box of chocolates in your honor).

The Exiles sounds like a great story i'll add it to my 'to read' list, i think that if i were a demon in hell and saw Joviana coming i would give her a wide berth after what happened last time ! I love that they got to spend soom private time together you write these sort of scenes very well.

Great detail in both her background and in the schizophrenia of her mother, does it take you long to research subjects such as these ? The idear about using Boris is great, we don't hear enougth from him (is he still alive in the comics ? i don't think i've seen him in a long time.By the way does he have a surname?)

Will we be seeing more of Robert Angivin soon ? he has a very original family history, i have to admit that i did not realise that there are different types of incest. How is your novel coming along ? it sounds interesting. Joviana's hunch about Reed and Victor is ah disturbing but not beyond the realms of possibility.

I really hope that she conquers her fears about having childeren if she does i'm sure that she would be a wonderful mother if you want her to be that is. Hmm a House of M subplot ? yes i am confused but i'm sure i won't be for long. Can't wait to find out what else Boris has to tell her, her respect for him is very touching and that she would put everything else on hold to hear what he has to say is nice.I can't help but wonder what they will do when he finaly dies.

Ok i think thats about everything (i wrote three pages of notes of things i wanted to mention) i do have a couple of questions if i may firstly did you deside on a honeymoon location and secondly will Joviana be having bridesmaids at the wedding ?By the way what do you think of the Books of Doom ? I think that so far Ed Brubaker has done an excellent job hopefully he will keep up the good work.

Thats everything for now in case i don't get to write another review i'd like to wish you a very happy Christmas and a prosperous new year. Until my next review Sarah.X

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From ANON - Nat on December 20, 2005
hi again loved this chapter like the way that you showed Jo being more loving towars the gifts that people have put their time into and worked to make insted of buying with their riches. I feel for Jo my mom does not like horses but im the one that rides three times a week lol well keep up the great writing and hope to see more of vic and jo soon! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on December 18, 2005
HUH? it that mystique as victor? and how did that person come without scars unless they saw vic before his transformation? GO JO she kicked ass! love the pen in eye manuover keep up the great writing and hope to see more of this interesting plot up soon :-)
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From ANON - Nat on December 14, 2005
Cermony ok... here my ideas since i now see how much money he has something like what he wears with the armor but sophisticated with intricate metal designs to show that he is still Doom but at the same time something unique that only victor would own or wear and of corse JO has to match or come close with her gown that would be really cute loved this chappie and hope to see more chapters up from you soon!
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From ANON - Nat on December 11, 2005
I Like! reminds me of my trip across the states flying gives you a lot of time to think espically with the fact that it took 7 hrs joy... loved the chappie and the thoughts of Jo on richard and Vic thoughts hope to see more alone time between the two soon got done watching the movie again vics too cute and i can really see him now i know he will be hot in a tux. ttfn hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)
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From ANON - Nat on December 07, 2005
Hi again loved the chapter and the lawyer I know of a women that is like that in court she's cool and the baby scene is too cute! hope to see more chapters up form you soon and can't wait for the wedding :-)
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