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By : Arcade
  • From ANON - n3bul4str1k3 on August 28, 2005
    well, this story is kinda nice, so yea... i'm happy with it! =)
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  • From ANON - Ann on August 19, 2005
    How about something more on MJ bashing for the way she's been treating peter?
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  • From ANON - Anonymous But Downright Intrigued on August 19, 2005
    Yeah, I can definitely understand where your coming from, Arcade. Both on your time point and your point about the reasons we come here. At any rate, I hope you find your muse soon and continue, but I know these things take time sometimes, so I can fully understand why it might take a while. Just do the best job you can as soon as you feel inspired. That's all I ask. :)
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  • From ANON - Arcade, too lazy to log in. on August 18, 2005
    This is a response to the person who apparantly did not enjoy this story as much as the rest of you.

    For the record, I realize the latest couple chapters of this story haven't been very plot driven, and I'll tell you why. If you're going to write a story heavy smut story you're going to need to do a few things, devote more time to write more, which I don't feel like doing, and/or cut out some sex scenes to develop the story more, which I won't do because I know the sex is the only reason 90% of people come to AFF. I find it hard to believe that people come here for an award winning story, because I know they don't, and I have plenty of stories as evidence to prove my point. Also, if this were a One-shot then not only would I want a decent, moderately believeable story, I'd expect it. However, writting chapter upon chapter and still holding together a decent storyline would take more time than I am willing to devote. For me this isn't even a hobby, it's just something I do when I either can't do my other hobbies or am so sick of them I need to do something else. I just write these people I know that not only will I enjoy this story, but plenty of other people will. I expect people to come to the table seeing this as what it is, masturbation material. If you didn't find it enjoyable I can see why you wouldn't, though I think if you are going to criticize my story for not having enough plot then you should have a look around AFF first, and if you're going to criticize my story, then I think there are thousands more that you need to do the same to.
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  • From alienyouthct on August 18, 2005
    I'd donate ideas, except I'd be rather embarrassed to see my name attached to this. Porn without plot is all well and good, but you could do a lot better than this without abandoning the general idea you've had.
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  • From ANON - Extremely Rare on August 18, 2005
    Make em fuck all together, but keep spidy tied tight, hehe
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  • From ANON - Anonymous But Downright Intrigued on August 17, 2005
    MAMA-MIA!! Downright great stuff. I wish I could think of some more stuff, but I'm strapped for ideas at present. I have to say though, you did a terrific job on this chapter. I'm definitely going to be very gladly awaiting more of this if you can think of anything. :)
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  • From ANON - Anonymous But Downright Intrigued on August 11, 2005
    Whoa, mama! I can't believe I missed a chapter due to real life. Oh well. Definitely some good stuff. Maybe some Femdom F/M BDSM when Pete wakes up.... completely naked and bound to a bed by either an extra-strong batch of his own webbing or some other extremely strong restraints the Black Cat had made to be able to hold him despite his superhuman strength. Of course, if you don't like the idea, you don't have to do it, but somehow that would seem almost just like BC to semi-realistically pull something like that in an NC-17 story.... get Peter so aroused as to be caught off-guard by the nutshot and then place him in a position where he would be helpless to do anything but enjoy what she had in store for him next. :)


    If you like the idea, I'll let your imagination fill in the other blanks. If not, I'm sorry for wasting your time.
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  • From ANON - James on August 11, 2005
    Awesome, I loved all of it please write more!! Sunday is too far away!
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  • From ANON - James on July 31, 2005
    After reading the current ultimate arcs. And semi-following the classic books for a few years now. I'm starting to not like MJ to much. Spiderman really needs a superhero girlfriend. And from the books with Blackcat i've read all Peter has to do is say the word and they'd be together. She really regrets letting the man she loved get away. She just made a mistake, and frankly I always thought the does she like me or my alter ego line in comics was mostly stupid. Keep writing love the story. Good mix of erotic and story. Plus any kind of BCat/peter story is good at thus point. But hey with MJ being temporarily out of the picture BCat and Peter have a chance in ultimate.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous But Downright Intrigued on July 29, 2005
    WHOA! Most definitely a very good piece of work so far. Love the Spidey/BC pairing and the mixture of hot and heavy sex and drama. I definitely wouldn't mind further chapters. Heck, maybe one of the later chapters could have one of them using Spidey's web-shooters to web the other one to a bed (no preference which one, but I could see Spidey whipping up an EXTRA-strong batch of web fluid in preparation one way or the other). Of course, that's just a suggestion; you don't have to use it if you don't want to. Whether you use it or not, I'm still eagerly looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Ann on July 25, 2005
    Honestly, I think this is definetly one of the BEST fanfic ever written with spider-man. I just LOVE this pairing how what you've done with it and made it more than just a scene. Definetly keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Ann on July 23, 2005
    This is story is simply beautiful!
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  • From ANON - RedCatt on July 09, 2005
    Hee...poor Spidey! He'd better hope MJ never finds out!!
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  • From ANON - yourthebest on July 09, 2005
    BEST FIC EVER! CONTINUE PLEASE too much potential to lose here
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