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By : Gevaisa
  • From ANON - Demos on August 11, 2005
    The way that you portray the Fantastic Four (particularly Reed) Is realy quite enjoyable.

    Its also kind of nice to see an erotic story thats not Totaly focused on sex :P

    I look foreward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Nat on August 10, 2005
    Totally awsome story so far! love the way that you portray victor he is really well done keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Beanie_platypus on August 08, 2005
    Yay! More Jovi! The Plot Thickens.... Now, is it safe to assume from Jovi's disparaging remarks about superheroes (property damage, psychological effects, etc), her apparent mission to do away with them, and her grandmother's implied death when Jovi was seven that her grandmother was killed in some way related to superheroes?
    Again, I am very much impressed with Joviana in her own right. There seems to be something about Latveria that attracts manipulators of the first class. Jovi's quasi-mom seems to be a very sweet woman, and I'm sad that she was so upset about her child's death she felt the need for a surrogate. But it does give you another way to portray Doom as a complicated mix of finer sensibilities and unerring devotion to his own ends. Bravo! All in all, chap. 5 has some very delicious revelations, but really nothing more than a taste. *sigh* Please continue. If you were to drop off the face of the earth at this point I would be quite miffed.
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  • From ANON - Dazzle on August 03, 2005
    Whoo. I'm gong to pretend that this an A/U. Because there's the issue of Valeria and the whole Unthinkable arch would just make this a little too uhm... I don't think Jovvie would be too keen to see her husband come home wearing the armor of his ex-girlfriend, kthx.
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  • From ANON - Soulshard on August 02, 2005
    This is without a doubt the best Doctor Doom story that i have ever read, i am in awe of your descriptive writing skills. Joviana is an original , intelligent character and i am really starting to enjoy her maniplative side i'm looking forward to seeing what her plans for Doom are. As good as Joviana is it is with Victor where the story really shines the characterization is simply perfect. The sex scene was erotic but not gratuitous i look forward to the wedding (i wonder if she will wear white ?) and the wedding night ! Thank you for sharing your talent with us i can't wait for the next chapter.
    Soulshard
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  • From ANON - Demos on August 02, 2005
    It's getting better with time :)
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  • From ANON - beanie on August 01, 2005
    This story is going places with Doom that I didn't think possible, and holding onto his character at the same time. Joviana is incredibly intriguing, especially the hints about her unhappy childhood and her plans for using Doom as "her lever." The ways she deals with him, working around his arrogance while still recognizing his strengths bodes very, very well for whatever she's up to, and I really want to see more interactions between the two of them. I really *like* her as a character; she compliments Doom very well, and despite her clear intentions to use him to some unspecified end, she doesn't seem unscrupulous or manipulative. She might just be as internally complex as Vic himself. Basically, this whole review boils down to one phrase: PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Chiyojo on July 23, 2005
    I like where you seem to be going with this. Not many authors can convey such good descriptions to the readers. Excellent writing- hope to see more!
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  • From ANON - Demos on July 10, 2005
    An excelent work of erotic fiction. Quite possibly the best I have encountered thus far on this site.
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  • From ANON - Chiyojo on July 08, 2005
    Loved the way you portrayed Dr. Doom in this fic! It would be great if you could continue, even if there was less smut. I'd love to see how Dr. Doom reacted if the lady got cold feet about the wedding and tried to run off! ^^
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  • From ANON - Jude on July 03, 2005
    This is a wonderful story. You've captured Doom's characteristics perfectly and you should most defintly continue this story! Good work :)
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  • From ANON - Sphira on July 03, 2005
    I'm curious. Do write more. Doom seems a little off. Not his maniacal self, but perhaps a few more chapters might display how he reacts at home as opposed when he is locked in his Epic Passionate Hateful Rivalry with Richards / Must Take Over the World Until I'm Bored – mode.

    And if you are the type to write slash... how about a Viktor/Reed fic one of these days? You're a good writer.
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  • From ANON - W.X. on June 25, 2005
    very nice! i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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